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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
each and every time ---------------------------- are you just a dream that enters my mind a sweetness so sublime when i'm rushing to and fro you sit in the background of the very front row my lips have spoken for you when you could not and listened as you talked in the darkness when I dream are you there love... are you there beneath the rain your a shadow in my thoughts i've touched you, though i have not and my finger tips have loved you each and every time James Parker Haley Feb 29, 2000 [This message has been edited by Haleyja (edited 03-01-2000).] |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Parker, so delicate and tender and just beyond one's grasp...I know this feeling well, I think. This is beautifully written. ~ Claire |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
James: Another perfect poem...I like the simple message you are able to communicate so easily. I really like the second verse the best. Marina |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
This is soft and gentle James...Quite easily sensual music to my ears sweetie!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Parker~ You say it just right. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Ah, Clair you have read so perfectly, thank you. Thanks Marina, it rushed into my mind and onto the paper. A soft Thank you devina, Marge thank you as always. Parker |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Parker, you truly are a gentle, romantic poet... Corinne |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this is beautiful...i really enjoyed this...and Claire said it perfectly... it is delicate...like a whisper...very nice work.jm You're going to hear my voice in the morning calling your name And know my love and my desperation were one and the same... Baby it's alright... Take this pain and all this sadness It's alright Take this rain You're going to be free... Jackson Browne *I love you baby* |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful poem, Parker!  Denise |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Corinne, I bow to a kindred spirit. This piece just wrote itself, I just lended my finger tips. Janet Marie, thank you, it was just in my mind. Denise, you snuck in there while I was replying... thank you. Parker [This message has been edited by Haleyja (edited 02-29-2000).] |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
this is beautiful, soft and straighforward, but reaching deep....great writing....and yep I know just what you mean when you say the piece just wrote itself... that's how most of mine come out too |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Corazon, thank you, somehow its amazing how that happens. Parker |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Wonderful poem, James. Exquisite work. Michael |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Thank you Michael, glad you liked it. Parker |
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Rosalind Palafox
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MemberPosts 88 |
OHhhh, defintely nice! "Love knows hidden paths."-German proverb |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Haleyja: Oh to feel a dream like that! Beautifully written. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Rosalind, thanks glad you like... Gemini, thank your it was an inspired dream. Parker |
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Nurse Crachet Member
since 1999-09-27
Posts 318They know where I am! |
Very nice poem, I liked the way it flowed so smoothly. Thanks for sharing your talent. |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
What beautful, romantic poetry!!!!! my words cannot express how lovely and flowing this was!!!! I Love it!!! "Love is not love Which alters when it alteration finds, Or bends with the remover to remove. O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare |
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U K Hero Member
since 1999-08-08
Posts 266England |
much enjoyed |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Like you need anymore replies here, but I just couldn't read this and NOT reply! This whispers to me in a voice so subtle, I tremble inside. How do you do it? "Are you there beneath the rain?" What a line! I am here beneath your rain, call me Jane...LOL  You've inspired me to write something along that line now! (grabbing pencil!) Thanks so much! Be right back! (dashing off - naked, into the rain!) |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
James--echos from all the above--just lovely! |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Your words are like the the first snowflakes of the year, beautiful, delicate and cherished because they are not the only ones you will see but they are the ones most remembered and most enjoyed. You have an amazing gift thank you for giving it to us to share. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Nurse Crachet, Christopher, glad you liked. thank you for reading. A Romantic Heart, thank your. U.K. Hero........ thank you too. Girls running around naked in the rain, flashing my poem, what is the world coming to. Thanks poetFemmeFatale... hey it said you'd be back. Martie, and I echo's my thanks thanks thanks to you, sweet poet. Butterflies_dont_cry, your name reminds me of a poem I wrote a long time ago.... Just for you and butterflies do cry........ Pink Butterfly ----------------- I remember from my earily teens The sadness of a lovely dream A girl I loved was soon to leave and embark upon her destiny. On this silvery moonlit night A misty glow just seem to light As we kissed our last goodbye She became a lovely Pink Butterfly. Parker........ I smile therefore I am. |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
I'M BACK! hehe (dripping wet and winded!) I made another footnote on my poem so that others will know where to come to read the REAL poem! LOL Yours is better than mine! Tis okay - I just want to thank you nonetheless.  (drumming up more business for ya - like you NEED it! ) LOLWell, gotta RUN! Wweeeeee! (leaving you in a *buff* of smoke!) |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
poetFemmeFatale, you had better stop flashing, I'm going to turn all read. |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
I happen to know sir, you're not the blushing type!  If you look up "innocent" in a dictionary, your picture will NOT be there! hehehe Have I told you thanks yet, for the inspiration? Thanks! |
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