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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 02-28-2000 11:50 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Seymour Tabin

                 Elizabeth

She draws her lines in mute compare,
From here, from there, from everywhere.
And weaves from them a melody,
Of verse and rhyme in rhapsody.

Circles jewels in worded orbits
Starlet filled with garland couplets.
Singing her song into the throng,
And lays the notes where they belong.

She strums the good, mellows the bad
And turns your mind away from sad.
Tranquilizing in her display,
Waving magic in words bouquet.

A heart that's lived enough to give.
A soul, opened and positive.
A breath of spring that whispers love,
Belief in God, that waits above.

She is to me my psyche view,
The one that I'm in full pursue.

© Copyright 2000 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 02-29-2000 12:02 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is so beautiful, Seymour! She does do all that so well, doesn't she?!

Denise
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Sy, she is as lovely as you say, and your words speak your heart beautifully.
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3 posted 02-29-2000 12:25 AM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

An excellent description, Sy....and very true, I believe.
Severn
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4 posted 02-29-2000 03:26 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Our dear Lizzy - and she deserves every word.

A graceful work, Sy.

K

 'Writing sharpens life;
life enriches writing'
Sylvia Plath
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How beautiful and so true!!!!
Wonderful tribute to our wonderful Lizzy , Sy  
Elizabeth Santos
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6 posted 02-29-2000 06:09 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Dear Sy,
If I could write a verse like this
My heart would be in constant bliss
Your words and phrases far surpass
Any penned by this fair lass
But coming from your poet quill
These words have garnished me with thrill
And I would send poetic kiss
If I could write a verse like this

Thank you, dear poet
I am honored
Love ya
Liz
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7 posted 02-29-2000 06:13 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Oh, Seymour~
How lovely and how fitting for
our ~fair Elizabeth~

How perfectly in tune
your muses.  Never have I seen
two poets who compliment each other
with the lovely verses as well as you two.

I would buy a book of 'He said/she said'
exchanges between you two.  
What inspiration you lend one another.

Wonderful ... Just wonderful.
~*Marge*~


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8 posted 02-29-2000 12:29 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Both of you talented folk please me very much.

 Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow

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Sy. . . you have that rare ability to see inside the very heart of the subjects that you write of. . . and Elizabeth is no different. . . very well done my friend. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Elizabeth Santos
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I was already overwhelmed by this poem, but your kind remarks were equally heartwarming. Thank you all very much
Liz
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"Singing her song into the throng,
And lays the notes where they belong."

...she certainly does, Seymour. Wonderful testimonial to a true poetic artisan.

~ Claire
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oh what a beautiful poem for a beautiful person  
HelmutB
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You did such nice poetic piece
Of a lady we call Liz (long z)  
And so yo should for she is nice and sweet
Your poem is so too, well done indeed

 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

Seymour Tabin
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Denise, Yes she does. *L*

Martie, Thank you Martie *L*

Balladeer, Thank you Mike

Severn, Thank you severn. *L*

Pepper, Thank you. *L*

Elizabeth, You fly upon the words of love
           And far surpass the words above.
Love Sy

Marge, This thought has crossed my head. *L*

Sunshine, Hello *L* thank you.

Sven, A wonderful complement.

Meadow, Thank you so much. *L*

Hoot, Yes she is and thank you. *L*
Marge Tindal
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15 posted 02-29-2000 09:39 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Seymour~ and Fair Elizabeth~

Please, please consider 'teaming' up on a collaboration
of back and forth poems.
One plants the seed ... one waters it.
I swear if I ever was right about something in my life ...
I'm right about this.

It is so apparent to me that the 'magic' exists in the responses you elicit from one another.  
I believe I called it 'Mirrored Muses'.  

Lizzie~ ... remember what I told you a long time ago about this ... (listen to me ... a 'long time ago' LOL !) well, it's been a few months anyway !

Now that I have the attention of BOTH of you,
JUST DO IT !
Time waits on no one !  
Today is now.
Tomorrow is just another today gone !

Love you both.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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