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The Ascent Of Love

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Alwye
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In the space between moments


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Raging like the untamed wind,
Passion's tempest rises,
Soaring on the river's path,
Boundless love is flying.

Feathered upon our spirits,
Burning within our souls,
Brushed within our skies,
Such vivid grandeur flows.

Drifting like melancholy words,
Contentment softly soothes,
Falling to the emerald banks,
The pulse of love does move.

Hushed within our hearts,
Blanketed upon our dreams,
Whispered upon our wishes,
Our cherished love does gleam.

Blossoming like a spicy rose,
Emotion floods the air,
Expanding into the heavens,
Love grows with tender care.

Present within our touch,
Visible within our eyes,
Knowing that for each other,
Each of us would die.




 *Krista Knutson*

"Every moment marked with apparitions of your soul...." ~*Sarah McLachlan- Do What You Have To Do*~

© Copyright 2000 Krista Botterill - All Rights Reserved
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Beautiful poem you've written here Krista!  Such a smooth piece and you can feel the love that you have for that lucky man of yours.  Great poem Krista, I really enjoyed it  

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2 posted 02-29-2000 12:03 AM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Hi Alwye,

This is a very beautiful and wonderfully written poem, thank you for sharing it.

Cerenity
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3 posted 02-29-2000 12:05 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Magnificent writing, as always, Krista!

Denise
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4 posted 02-29-2000 12:28 AM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Wonderful poem Krista!
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5 posted 02-29-2000 06:27 AM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

As stated in the last verse

Present within our touch,
Visible within our eyes,
Knowing that for each other,
Each of us would die.

No greater gift than to give ones life for another.  Nice writing

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6 posted 02-29-2000 06:29 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Krista~
You speak volumes from your heart.
Exquisite.
~*Marge*~


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Wow, what feeling, well done !

Paul  
Alwye
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Thank you all so much!  

 *Krista Knutson*

"Every moment marked with apparitions of your soul...." ~*Sarah McLachlan- Do What You Have To Do*~

 
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