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Distance~

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Breathe~
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0 posted 02-28-2000 09:43 PM       View Profile for Breathe~   Email Breathe~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Breathe~

Smiling brown eyes
husky tones tantalize my ears
haunt me
own me
My fingers yearn to touch you
my tongue taste you
Smell your scent
hot and alive
when you love me
Smiles of pleasure
hands entangled in my hair
pulling me closer
Lips upon my skin
lips upon mine
Baby I'm going crazy
distance
the enemy
killing me slowly
My heart far away
with you
where it belongs
When will I be?
Will I be at all?
Miles and miles away
from my desire
Can I do this?
Oh lord I love you
Time passing
always passing
agonizing moments
empty of you...



 I love the time
and in between
the calm inside me
in the space
where I can breathe...

Sarah McLachlan
© Copyright 2000 Denise Blackwell - All Rights Reserved
Aimster
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1 posted 02-28-2000 09:54 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

~wow

should i be reading this? lol...felt like i stepped into a romance novel...this was very moving. loved it. thanks for sharing.


amy  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
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2 posted 02-28-2000 10:24 PM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

Deep in thought...I too know these feelings well.  Excellent

 There are two kinds of pedestrians...the quick and the dead. Drive it like you stole it.

Denise
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Beautiful, Breathe!  

Denise
Janet Marie
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4 posted 02-28-2000 11:11 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

this is excellently expressed...very well written, its nice to see honest sensuality included in these emotions. When we miss someone desperatly...we miss everything about them, even their "scent" i relate to this one! take care, janet marie

 You're going to hear my voice in the morning calling your name
And know my love and my desperation were one and the same...
And where our footprints used to be
There'll be nothing but the sea
And the tide and the wind and the open sky
And the unbroken horizon...
Baby it's alright...
Take this pain and all this sadness
It's alright
Take this rain
You're going to be free...
Jackson Browne
*I love you baby*

 
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