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City Noises

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Manchester
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0 posted 02-28-2000 09:28 PM       View Profile for Manchester   Email Manchester   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Manchester

Someone is ringing a bell in my heart,
Ding Dong, I have forgotten to breathe,
I thought I was laughing with my friends,
And Listening to their stories,
I guess something has been a little wring with me lately,
Tears fall from my eyes unexpectedly,

City noises and the whispers of the trees,
Have been singing softly for a long time,
To me who fell in love before I knew it...

Though suddenly I wan to be alone,
Being alone is painful,
Until yesterday I could have died peacefully,
It was just like a dream...

City noises and the colors of the wind,
Are sad and beautiful,
Just like talking to myself,
I want her to hear that,
The one I fell in love with...

The days I canít see her are painful,
I wonder if Iíll love her more and more, more than now,
I guess I fell in love, endless love...

City noises and the whispers of the wind,
Please keep singing softly,
I guess I fell in love before I knew it...
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Manchester
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1 posted 02-28-2000 09:30 PM       View Profile for Manchester   Email Manchester   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Manchester

When reading this, please bear in mind that I was sitting in a park, going into 4 days sleepless.  My original version of this was done in Japanese and I also wrote music for it.

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Parker
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Manchester, I think this version is amazing,
Great stuff, more please.

Parker
 
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