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Manchester
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0 posted 02-28-2000 08:55 PM       View Profile for Manchester   Email Manchester   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Manchester

Would the reason to become whole be man's only dream?
Trapped within a fleeting song the words are whispered softly, but the ear is dulled by too many earnest pleas.
Can love be so strong as to heal the weakened soul, and can a harlot learn to be an angel within his adoring hold?
Can a man dare himself to let go of all the pain,
to safely fall within her stirring wake, void of all the shame.
When two become one... perhaps all fades...but in this realm where reality screams...we hide our faces behind a stony gaze.


-Another Mindbite by Manchester
© Copyright 2000 Manchester - All Rights Reserved
Aimster
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1 posted 02-28-2000 09:08 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

~and i liked this one too! *smiles*. giving yourself completely to another person is not as easy as it sounds. it takes a lot of faith and trust, and time. this piece really hit home for me. thanks

amy  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
Meadowmuse
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"Can love be so strong as to heal the weakened soul"

The questioning theme of this piece gives it its life. I enjoy a poem that asks the reader to envision and examine principles of human characteristics. I really enjoyed this!  Welcome to Passions, Manchester.

~ Claire
Manchester
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3 posted 02-28-2000 09:18 PM       View Profile for Manchester   Email Manchester   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Manchester

I thank you both for such kind words.  Thank you.  ^_^
Parker
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A true mindbite indeed, welcome to Passions, I like this one much.

Parker
 
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