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Manchester Junior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 15 |
Would the reason to become whole be man's only dream? Trapped within a fleeting song the words are whispered softly, but the ear is dulled by too many earnest pleas. Can love be so strong as to heal the weakened soul, and can a harlot learn to be an angel within his adoring hold? Can a man dare himself to let go of all the pain, to safely fall within her stirring wake, void of all the shame. When two become one... perhaps all fades...but in this realm where reality screams...we hide our faces behind a stony gaze. -Another Mindbite by Manchester |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
~and i liked this one too! *smiles*. giving yourself completely to another person is not as easy as it sounds. it takes a lot of faith and trust, and time. this piece really hit home for me. thanks amy  ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
"Can love be so strong as to heal the weakened soul" The questioning theme of this piece gives it its life. I enjoy a poem that asks the reader to envision and examine principles of human characteristics. I really enjoyed this! Welcome to Passions, Manchester. ~ Claire |
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Manchester Junior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 15 |
I thank you both for such kind words. Thank you. ^_^ |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
A true mindbite indeed, welcome to Passions, I like this one much. Parker |
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