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The Spawn

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RobertB
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The Spawn

In passions torrent over
smooth stones white
with froth unnoticed by
spawning's urge over
the falls of genetic fever
pitched in darkness spoken
through salmon lips whispering
a quiet place of birth held sacred
immortal in beginnings
mortal by death.

Robert
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Denise
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1 posted 02-28-2000 09:57 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is beautiful, Robert! Very lovely!

Denise
Corinne
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Dark and intense, Robert!

Corinne
WhtDove
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Robert you still got it!  
Poet deVine
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He does! Wish I had it....have a hard time with this kind of poetry...maybe I need a leather jacket and a Harley?  Excellent Robert... block gone?
Meadowmuse
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I like your style, Robert. This one's an interesting piece...lots of prepositions.  

~ Claire
RobertB
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6 posted 02-29-2000 07:13 AM       View Profile for RobertB   Email RobertB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RobertB

hehehe this was one of those 5 second poems in response to an individual in another forum who does the same thing to me!!

Yeah...maybe the block is gone...just let it flow.....stop all the trying so hard.

Thanks!!

Robert
Paul Hoekman
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I love to fish!
I know this is deeper than that.
BUT
I love to fish!


[This message has been edited by Paul Hoekman (edited 03-01-2000).]
RobertB
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Hi Paul....you know...I love to THINK about fishing.....that's about as far as I get it seems.

Robert
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