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The Spawn
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The Spawn |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL 
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The Spawn In passions torrent over smooth stones white with froth unnoticed by spawning's urge over the falls of genetic fever pitched in darkness spoken through salmon lips whispering a quiet place of birth held sacred immortal in beginnings mortal by death. Robert |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, Robert! Very lovely! Denise |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Dark and intense, Robert! Corinne |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Robert you still got it!  |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
He does! Wish I had it....have a hard time with this kind of poetry...maybe I need a leather jacket and a Harley? Excellent Robert... block gone? |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
I like your style, Robert. This one's an interesting piece...lots of prepositions. ~ Claire |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
hehehe this was one of those 5 second poems in response to an individual in another forum who does the same thing to me!! Yeah...maybe the block is gone...just let it flow.....stop all the trying so hard. Thanks!! Robert |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
I love to fish! I know this is deeper than that. BUT I love to fish! [This message has been edited by Paul Hoekman (edited 03-01-2000).] |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
Hi Paul....you know...I love to THINK about fishing.....that's about as far as I get it seems. Robert |
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