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KRex
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since 2000-02-27
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0 posted 2000-02-28 06:23 PM




Tiny grains of sand trough the hourglass slowly pass
Through the tests of time my love for you will always last
The days grow longer with you so far away
I lie here and think of you every single day
My love for you increases with each moment gone by
Without yours in return, I'm sure I would die
So I send this gift across the distance so blue
A small token of love, just from me to you

© Copyright 2000 KRex - All Rights Reserved
Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
1 posted 2000-02-28 09:45 PM


~krex~

this is simply beautiful! whomever this person is, sure is lucky to have you! i hope your true love returns to you soon. take care, and keep writing. this is really good!

amy  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~

RufffRyder
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since 2000-02-25
Posts 143
<------Over There------>
2 posted 2000-02-28 09:51 PM


Very well said Krex and I hope you`ve sent it to the one you`ve written it for.
Thank you for the read

Corinne
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since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167
state of confusion
3 posted 2000-02-28 10:18 PM


Very lovely!

Corinne

Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
4 posted 2000-02-29 09:23 AM


Hi KRex,

This poem belongs on a card. I loved it thanks.

Cerenity

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
5 posted 2000-02-29 11:23 AM


Beautiful  
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