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Brave New Love

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Poeminister
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Brave New Love

Brave New Love
You begin here
Upon these vacant fields
of diminished fear

The battle is won
so feel at ease
to roam this trampled land
of former tragedies

Old grave Fear
did fight well
but his army pampered in gear
with Terror fell

Your sword plunged
like great Excaliber
into your adversaries' chests
with cut-steel valor

The sheathed ghost
of the past exploit    
was at the front so foremost
and viciously destroyed

Lavished beyond moist
in invisible blood
your sword of courage did hoist
him out of the void

Now errant Love
like a lost knight
Your quest a mystery made of
to sally into tonight

By a new star
a damsel true
will be steep in passion soon
for the reborn you





[This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 02-28-2000).]
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Cerenity
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1 posted 02-29-2000 09:05 AM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Hi Poeminister,

This was very wonderfully put I understand this poem very well, thank you for the read.

Cerenity
Denise
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2 posted 02-29-2000 11:46 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Wonderful poem, Poeminister! Beautiful!

Denise
Paul Hoekman
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3 posted 02-29-2000 03:11 PM       View Profile for Paul Hoekman   Email Paul Hoekman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Paul Hoekman's Home Page   View IP for Paul Hoekman

EXCELLENT!
Now if I could only get all this heavy armor
off I could spend some time cleaning up me
castle.
Elizabeth Santos
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4 posted 02-29-2000 05:14 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Enjoyed his poem very much, very creative writing, and excellent
Liz
 
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