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Poeminister
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since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

0 posted 2000-02-28 05:27 PM





Brave New Love

Brave New Love
You begin here
Upon these vacant fields
of diminished fear

The battle is won
so feel at ease
to roam this trampled land
of former tragedies

Old grave Fear
did fight well
but his army pampered in gear
with Terror fell

Your sword plunged
like great Excaliber
into your adversaries' chests
with cut-steel valor

The sheathed ghost
of the past exploit    
was at the front so foremost
and viciously destroyed

Lavished beyond moist
in invisible blood
your sword of courage did hoist
him out of the void

Now errant Love
like a lost knight
Your quest a mystery made of
to sally into tonight

By a new star
a damsel true
will be steep in passion soon
for the reborn you





[This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 02-28-2000).]

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Cerenity
Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
1 posted 2000-02-29 09:05 AM


Hi Poeminister,

This was very wonderfully put I understand this poem very well, thank you for the read.

Cerenity

Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

2 posted 2000-02-29 11:46 AM


Wonderful poem, Poeminister! Beautiful!

Denise

Paul Hoekman
Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382
Harwinton Ct. U>S>A>
3 posted 2000-02-29 03:11 PM


EXCELLENT!
Now if I could only get all this heavy armor
off I could spend some time cleaning up me
castle.

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
4 posted 2000-02-29 05:14 PM


Enjoyed his poem very much, very creative writing, and excellent
Liz

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