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The Perfect Girl

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PoeticKnight
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0 posted 02-28-2000 12:16 PM       View Profile for PoeticKnight   Email PoeticKnight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for PoeticKnight

Unfriendly visions cloud my decisions
When I think of her
All my dreams are not what they seem
But itís something that I prefer

Still, thereís a certain kind of feeling
That I get which brings healing
Her hands work their magic on me
As I sail on this uncharted sea

Out of the fire, onto the funeral pyre
This time, once again
Itís not surprising how I am rising
Above all of this sin

Smoke is everywhere
My head is in the air
They search in vain the whole wide world,
For their own perfect girl

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Janet Marie
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1 posted 02-28-2000 05:34 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

"Unfriendly visions cloud my decisions
When I think of her
All my dreams are not what they seem
But itís something that I prefer

Still, thereís a certain kind of feeling
That I get which brings healing
Her hands work their magic on me
As I sail on this uncharted sea"...

the perfect girl...I'm not sure...
the perfect poem...Oh yes...
stalking on to the next one....



 She says baby,
It's 3am I must be lonely,
When she says baby,
Well I can't help but be scared of it all sometimes,
Says the rains gonna wash away I believe it.
Matchbox20

I love you baby... always.*


PoeticKnight
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2 posted 02-28-2000 05:37 PM       View Profile for PoeticKnight   Email PoeticKnight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PoeticKnight

Thanks janet, as always, you are the best.
tulip
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3 posted 02-28-2000 05:56 PM       View Profile for tulip   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for tulip

JML,
You took me away with this one!
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