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Open Poetry #6

The Perfect Girl

PoeticKnight
Senior Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

0 posted 2000-02-28 12:16 PM

Unfriendly visions cloud my decisions
When I think of her
All my dreams are not what they seem
But it’s something that I prefer

Still, there’s a certain kind of feeling
That I get which brings healing
Her hands work their magic on me
As I sail on this uncharted sea

Out of the fire, onto the funeral pyre
This time, once again
It’s not surprising how I am rising
Above all of this sin

Smoke is everywhere
My head is in the air
They search in vain the whole wide world,
For their own perfect girl

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-02-28 05:34 PM

"Unfriendly visions cloud my decisions
When I think of her
All my dreams are not what they seem
But it’s something that I prefer

Still, there’s a certain kind of feeling
That I get which brings healing
Her hands work their magic on me
As I sail on this uncharted sea"...

the perfect girl...I'm not sure...
the perfect poem...Oh yes...

stalking on to the next one....

She says baby,
It's 3am I must be lonely,
When she says baby,
Well I can't help but be scared of it all sometimes,
Says the rains gonna wash away I believe it.
Matchbox20

I love you baby... always.*

PoeticKnight
Senior Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

2 posted 2000-02-28 05:37 PM

Thanks janet, as always, you are the best.

tulip
Member

since 1999-07-04

Posts 320
unknown

3 posted 2000-02-28 05:56 PM

JML,
You took me away with this one!

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