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The Couch From Hell

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Cerenity
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0 posted 02-28-2000 11:10 AM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Cerenity

I got a chance to see
the man of my dreams
today at first mornings
light, with all of the
strength and might he has
right now he's sleeping
and very much a sight.

I guess I should not wake
him, he sleeps so very well
on that couch he loves and
will not sell.

I can't understand it, it's
tattered and torn, and really
does smell. The springs stick
out, the arms sag as well.

But some day I know and I can
wait, I will not have to share
my man with that couch from hell.


Cerenity

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Denise
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1 posted 02-28-2000 11:32 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is great! Lighthearted, delightful!!

Denise
Cerenity
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2 posted 02-28-2000 11:29 PM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Hi Denise,

Thank you so much for your reply.
I have to say that it does not seem to matter what couch I have he's got the remote in one hand and is fast asleep.

Cerenity
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3 posted 02-28-2000 11:31 PM       View Profile for bobbycat   Email bobbycat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bobbycat

Oh, are you sure you're not married to my husband???  LOL     he's a remote-sleeper, too!!!  Great poem!  

Bobbycat =^..^=


 ~~Blessed Be!~~
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4 posted 02-28-2000 11:41 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Hey, it sounds like we are all married to the same guy.....hehehehehe  

Denise
 
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