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a crystal casualty
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a crystal casualty |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209
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she has her reasons to be sure, all packed away inside fairly safe, too despite their fragile surroundings one wakes her up in the morning a little one brings her smiles another makes her go to work each day, and there's one she can't put words to that hasn't let her leave so there must be another that makes her stay but there was one more, and I guess I'd have to say her reason couldn't reason anymore for now she had to find why they all chose to unbelieve. the finding grew unfathomable and her reason cracked just shattered made a mess all over the floor and as she laughed strangely and ran away she took one look back at the crystal casualty [This message has been edited by Corazon (edited 02-28-2000).] |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Now I could be a mean O&O and wonder where this "reason" had been hiding... *G* or I could simply say sadly beautiful... and hand over the super glue. *S* |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
Wow...Corazon, you have a really cool poem here! I loved it! Suthern: LOL!!! stay cool  ~~Lavada~~ "For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin [This message has been edited by sweetcollege_girl (edited 02-28-2000).] |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
thanks suthern, and yep as soon as I find all the pieces...will sure need that glue...sigh sc girl thanks  |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
One day you'll put all those pieces together my friend and get on with your life |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Excellent poem, Corazon! Very well done! Denise |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
If I could, I'd snap my fingers and put everything back in place m'dear!!! Very well said...hang in there!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
I just love your poems! You have such a way with words...and the way your put your thoughts together are just inspirational... I find it so fasinating how differently people write and how it is all equally beautiful in the individuality...(if that makes sense.. )I love the time and in between the calm inside me in the space where I can breathe... Sarah McLachlan |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
thanks all, your replies mean much to me, specially today |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Great poem, k z. And cheer up, okay? At least we're friends. Look at this way: it's better to realize something, be unhappy with the past, and implement change and make yr own future than to just stay in a rut, unhappy, permanently. You're doing the right thing. |
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JTF Member
since 1999-08-09
Posts 319France |
Isn't there a saying about breaking glass means 7 years of happiness ? ... Corazon, with crystal you'll have 77 of them ... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Corazon~ Sometimes even 'crystal hearts' shatter. But, hon ... there is beauty in the pieces. Be kind to yourself this day. *HUG* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sometimes our lives consist of going to pieces and putting them back together...but we have to keep trying.......and you have such WONDERFUL pieces! |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Corazon, very sad and sweet, Hugs. Parker |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
The crystal shards left lying scattered on the floor Reflect a kaleidoscope of colors More beautiful than before. Only when it’s broken Do the lights dance across the glass The future’s shining, sparkling Let go of the past. Weep not for the crystal although broken, it has grown from a symbol of holding it together to someone shining on her own. It matters not how strait the gate; How charged with punishments the scroll; I am the master of my fate: I am the captain of my soul. --W.E. Henley |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Tara, what a great response! Corazon, I love this poem, but not if it's true. Liz |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
thanks all, there are so many beautiful souls who reside here, tara I will save that poem, it is perfect |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
Corazon, I'm glad you liked it. You are an amazing woman and a gifted writer. Elizabeth, thanks. |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
tara, that you could look at the pieces of me that tumble out tattered bits, posted through need and see the me, the whole, happy me, that I want to be... now that my friend is amazing to me... thank you so much for your kindness |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Corazon, I read this and see me. Thanks for sharing. Beautifully done ~shadows dance by the light within~ |
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