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angel girl
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since 1999-07-23

Posts 322
within a whisper...

0 posted 2000-02-28 07:17 AM

If I could smell the dafidils
And run amond the whiper-wills

And remember any childhood thrills
And watch the stars beyond the hills

And sit upon my window-sill
As the wind to the trees kneel,

Holding the breath of remembrance still,
I would at last know the feel

Of experiencing joy and zeal-
Knowing living is God's will.

One touch of nature makes the whole world kin.
-William Shakespeare

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-02-28 11:45 AM

This is beautiful, Angel Girl!

Denise

Dennis L. White
Senior Member

since 2000-02-17

Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.

2 posted 2000-02-28 11:55 AM

Amen to that Angel Girl. Good observation!
Dennis :^)

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

3 posted 2000-02-28 12:03 PM

very nice poem

angel girl
Member

since 1999-07-23

Posts 322
within a whisper...

4 posted 2000-02-29 01:33 PM

Thank you all for your comments.

One touch of nature makes the whole world kin.
-William Shakespeare

childomine
Senior Member

since 2000-01-25

Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL

5 posted 2000-02-29 01:37 PM

Your poem makes me yearn for days gone by. Beautiful.

Parker
Member Elite

since 2000-01-06

Posts 3129
ON

6 posted 2000-02-29 10:52 PM

Very nice angel girl, very nice.

Parker

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

7 posted 2000-02-29 11:02 PM

This is a wonderful poem, angel. A lovely message too. Beautiful.

Michael

angel girl
Member

since 1999-07-23

Posts 322
within a whisper...

8 posted 2000-03-01 07:14 AM

Thanks again. I couldn't sleep, and couldn't get the thought out of my mind.

One touch of nature makes the whole world kin.
-William Shakespeare

January Flowers
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since 2000-02-01

Posts 209
South Carolina

9 posted 2000-03-01 07:19 AM

"If", indeed. I liked this one, angel, for it's simplicity and intricate meaning. I wish it was so easy to release the details of my adult life and appreciate my reason for being much more than I do.

Lost Dreamer
Member Elite

since 1999-06-20

Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

10 posted 2000-03-01 08:39 AM

I agree this is beautiful.

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