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angel girl
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0 posted 02-28-2000 07:17 AM       View Profile for angel girl   Email angel girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for angel girl

If I could smell the dafidils
And run amond the whiper-wills

And remember any childhood thrills
And watch the stars beyond the hills

And sit upon my window-sill
As the wind to the trees kneel,

Holding the breath of remembrance still,
I would at last know the feel

Of experiencing joy and zeal-
Knowing living is God's will.

 One touch of nature makes the whole world kin.
-William Shakespeare

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Denise
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1 posted 02-28-2000 11:45 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is beautiful, Angel Girl!  

Denise
Dennis L. White
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2 posted 02-28-2000 11:55 AM       View Profile for Dennis L. White   Email Dennis L. White   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dennis L. White

Amen to that Angel Girl. Good observation!
Dennis :^)
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3 posted 02-28-2000 12:03 PM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for vandana

very nice poem
angel girl
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4 posted 02-29-2000 01:33 PM       View Profile for angel girl   Email angel girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angel girl

Thank you all for your comments.

 One touch of nature makes the whole world kin.
-William Shakespeare

childomine
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5 posted 02-29-2000 01:37 PM       View Profile for childomine   Email childomine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for childomine

Your poem makes me yearn for days gone by.  Beautiful.
Parker
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6 posted 02-29-2000 10:52 PM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

Very nice angel girl, very nice.

Parker
Michael
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7 posted 02-29-2000 11:02 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

This is a wonderful poem, angel.  A lovely message too.  Beautiful.


Michael
angel girl
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8 posted 03-01-2000 07:14 AM       View Profile for angel girl   Email angel girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angel girl

Thanks again. I couldn't sleep, and couldn't get the thought out of my mind.

 One touch of nature makes the whole world kin.
-William Shakespeare

January Flowers
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9 posted 03-01-2000 07:19 AM       View Profile for January Flowers   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for January Flowers

"If", indeed.  I liked this one, angel, for it's simplicity and intricate meaning.  I wish it was so easy to release the details of my adult life and appreciate my reason for being much more than I do.  
Lost Dreamer
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10 posted 03-01-2000 08:39 AM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

I agree this is beautiful.
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