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Silence of My Song
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Silence of My Song |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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It is just this-- this thing i have-- it has been here all along... it is this thing, stands inbetween... it is the silence of my song. Urge is hunger-- deep in heart-- painful-beat-by-beat... it is surrender in your eyes that i have yet to see... it is the half-breath that i gasp at half-the-thought-of-you-- it's in your words-- all that i've heard-- all the wonder that i can have of you... It is the silence before the sound that endears it most profound... And all that i will hope of you. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ This is lovely. I really like this line ... 'it is the half-breath that i gasp at half-the-thought-of-you--' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is a beautiful song, Serenity! Very lovely! Denise |
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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
Urge is hunger-- deep in heart-- painful-beat-by-beat... it is surrender in your eyes~~ *sighs*....Here's to your hopes...and may they become reality...Whew! I liked this..  I love the time and in between the calm inside me in the space where I can breathe... Sarah McLachlan |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Urge is hunger, deep in heart...this line was my undoing this morning dear...hope you get all that your heart hopes for!!!!  Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thanks to all, especially 'Mom'--and I could swear i hear people praying for me. Thanx. |
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