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Silence of My Song

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serenity blaze
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It is just this--
this thing i have--
it has been here all along...
it is this thing, stands inbetween...
it is the silence of my song.

Urge is hunger--
deep in heart--
painful-beat-by-beat...
it is surrender in your eyes
that i have yet to see...
it is the half-breath that i gasp
at half-the-thought-of-you--
it's in your words--
all that i've heard--
all the wonder that i can have of you...

It is the silence
before the sound
that endears it most profound...

And all that i will hope of you.
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1 posted 02-28-2000 05:48 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Serenity~
This is lovely.
I really like this line ...

'it is the half-breath that i gasp
at half-the-thought-of-you--'

~*Marge*~




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This is a beautiful song, Serenity! Very lovely!

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Urge is hunger--
deep in heart--
painful-beat-by-beat...
it is surrender in your eyes~~

*sighs*....Here's to your hopes...and may they become reality...Whew!  I liked this..


 I love the time
and in between
the calm inside me
in the space
where I can breathe...

Sarah McLachlan
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Urge is hunger, deep in heart...this line was my undoing this morning dear...hope you get all that your heart hopes for!!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
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5 posted 02-28-2000 09:37 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Thanks to all, especially 'Mom'--and I
could swear i hear people praying for me.
Thanx.
 
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