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whiskey
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0 posted 02-28-2000 12:58 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Little Bears all in a row
Is the picture I see
When I think of you
Trinkets collected
From loved ones
You kept them all
Eggs of marble
Paper cranes
All those things
We'd make and frame
I remember the cuddles
You would give
When home we would bring
The newest creation we'd made
Up on the mantle you'd sit it
Along with the others before it
Treasures in time
Our childhood in different forms
The kisses we'd get
You were so proud
You gave us the best start
Now out in the world for ourselves
Dealing with everyday things
I will never forget the love
I felt being part of you
Mum you are a great friend
Over time Ive learnt this
But now I know
I treasure it so
© Copyright 2000 Julie Nelson - All Rights Reserved
Severn
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1 posted 02-28-2000 03:56 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Just wonderful, Whisky - it is truthful too.

K

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life enriches writing'
Sylvia Plath
JamesMichael
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2 posted 02-28-2000 04:08 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Sounds like wonderful memories and a wonderful relationship.   James
tracie66
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3 posted 02-28-2000 04:25 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Whiskey what a beautiful poem for your mum   here's one I wrote for mine which I think you'd appreciate...tracie

A friend is someone who doesn't judge you
A friend will always see you through

The good, the bad, happy and sad
They will always lend a hand

Friends make us laugh, show us a good time
Their always there to say things are fine

Thank god for friends, we all need one
And I've got one in you
Thanks Mum


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Anne Rooks
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4 posted 02-28-2000 04:47 AM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

The best treasures of all are those memories...they only come once and when you can share them....they only get better.  Grace to  you and your mother Wiskey.  You have done a great job with this.

 There are two kinds of pedestrians...the quick and the dead. Drive it like you stole it.

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5 posted 02-28-2000 11:43 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

A wonderful tribute to your mother, Whiskey! Very beautiful!  

Denise

[This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 02-28-2000).]
Dennis L. White
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6 posted 02-28-2000 12:00 PM       View Profile for Dennis L. White   Email Dennis L. White   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dennis L. White

Thank God for wonderful mothers, thier praises mean so much to those who are small.
Thanks for sharing this! Dennis :^)
Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 02-28-2000 12:15 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Whiskey,
Wonderful emotions and poem.
Paul Hoekman
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Who Rocks?

WHISKEY!

And that is my final answer Regis.

Sincerely though, Very touching.

I've been away way too long glad to see
your still keeping up the quality you
started with!
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9 posted 02-29-2000 03:32 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

This is beautiful!  
RufffRyder
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You have a very warm way with words Whiskey.
I can tell that you are very close to your Mum and Im sure that she`s a very proud mum to have a loving daughter as you
Thank you for the warm read Whiskey
whiskey
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11 posted 02-29-2000 09:28 PM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Thanks everyone I am glad you all enjoyed the poem , thank you forall you kind words  
JulieAnn
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12 posted 06-25-2000 01:21 AM       View Profile for JulieAnn   Email JulieAnn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JulieAnn

Very sweet poem...it made me think of my Mom seh never throws ANYTHING away......

Julie :)


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