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Fire and Desire

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KRex
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0 posted 02-27-2000 10:01 PM       View Profile for KRex   Email KRex   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for KRex



For the first time
I feel something inside
Refusing to go away
Eternal

A strong, passionate feeling
Needing you always near
Denying nothing

Deep wells of love
Ever plauging me
Silent nights of wondering
If this is meant to be
Rescue me from these
Everlasting dreams of you

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KRex
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1 posted 02-27-2000 10:04 PM       View Profile for KRex   Email KRex   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for KRex

dman, your a good poet
Dawn Eclipse
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2 posted 02-27-2000 10:14 PM       View Profile for Dawn Eclipse   Email Dawn Eclipse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dawn Eclipse

Excelent poem!  I especially love the first stanza... it has some real emotion in it.  Everlasting dreams are a wonderful thing... Sometimes it is better to stay within them.  I will look forward to reading more of your poetry!  Welcome!

[This message has been edited by Dawn Eclipse (edited 02-27-2000).]
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Great poem , Very well done, I enjoyed it alot   welcome to passions
Severn
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4 posted 02-28-2000 03:33 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Welcome to Passions...

Nice work.



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life enriches writing'
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5 posted 02-28-2000 10:38 PM       View Profile for Soleil   Email Soleil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Soleil

First poem I pulled up, I liked it, but
I probably would have framed these feelings in a more structured form.
Manchester
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6 posted 02-28-2000 10:42 PM       View Profile for Manchester   Email Manchester   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Manchester

Love springs eternal.   But you almost seem to question it.  Great poem.


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