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Lust's Impowerment

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devina
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0 posted 02-27-2000 09:24 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for devina



I crave upon your carnal infliction,
Your magic fingertips, my addiction,
You and me- a walking contradiction.

Impowerment is the disease-
Yet to be cured,
Enslavement is to be-
My downfall for sure.

I can't explain this yearning-
This attraction beyond measure,
I find myself begging, hurting-
Honestly needing to be pleasured.

Openly I ask of thee-
You do not love,
So set me free.
What is this enchantment-
You've bestowed upon me?

Too much confusion,
Lies between our midst,
Yet my senses unmuddle,
With just one kiss.
I love you- you lie-
By imprisonment of this,
I'll die.

Let me go peacefully by your hand-
My lustful desire-
I no longer understand.
Rather be an angel, you see-
Than go on living-
Only by desire of thee,
The one I love so completely.




 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
© Copyright 2000 Tanya Nicole Bustamante - All Rights Reserved
Dark Angel
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1 posted 02-27-2000 09:43 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Devina, I really liked this... Wonderful!!  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Marina
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2 posted 02-27-2000 09:44 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

This is an excellent poem devina.  All to real for a great deal of us I'm sure.

Marina
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3 posted 02-27-2000 09:46 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Wowee! Talk about the enchainment of love and a slave to passion! You have described it perfectly............
Marge Tindal
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4 posted 02-27-2000 11:30 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Devina~
This is good.
Just plain good.
~*Marge*~


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Meadowmuse
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5 posted 02-27-2000 11:37 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

Marge obviously knows from whence she speaks, Devina...this is just plain good. The theme of passion's captivity is superbly projected in this piece.

Claire  
Michael
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6 posted 02-28-2000 02:11 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Immensely emotional poem, devina.  This was so GOOD it hurt...  Very powerful work.


Michael
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7 posted 02-28-2000 03:53 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

That's it!  Now i KNOW you are my psychic friend...lovely, devina, just lovely...
First__Knight
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8 posted 02-28-2000 04:52 AM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

Words could do little justice to this work Devina.  This has the power to invoke that which many hide.....the power of shameless love.  Excellent

 There are two kinds of pedestrians...the quick and the dead. Drive it like you stole it.

devina
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9 posted 02-28-2000 12:58 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

Dark Angel- My thanks, wasn't sure how this one would take!!

Marina-Yep, and all to real for me as well!!!

Balladeer- uh-oh...I'm already telling on myself here huh??? G*

Marge- Glad you liked, your words always mean so much sweetie!!!!

Claire- Yep, Marge always has a way of just "knowing"   Thank you!!

Michael-I'm glad you can see the many emotions here...Lust is a powerful element indeed!!! Thanks hun!!!

serenity- I'm glad we both relate on so many things...Amazing is it not??? Me, phsycic??? You're wonderful dear!!! I'll take that as a compliment!!G*

First Knight- Well I guess you can gather that I'm not exactly the blushing female!!hehe Sometimes I'm too honest for my own good!!!!


 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...
Breathe~
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10 posted 02-28-2000 01:00 PM       View Profile for Breathe~   Email Breathe~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Breathe~

Ooooooh...*catching my breath*

Powerful and enticing...

Wonderful Devina..


 I love the time
and in between
the calm inside me
in the space
where I can breathe...

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11 posted 02-28-2000 01:22 PM       View Profile for RufffRyder   Email RufffRyder   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RufffRyder's Home Page   View IP for RufffRyder

Another bit of your heart has surely been put into this one.
I enjoy the talent that you`ve shown in your work.
Excellent read devina
Elizabeth Santos
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12 posted 02-28-2000 02:24 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

A powerful poem, and easy to relate to the undertow of passion
Very well written
Liz
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13 posted 02-28-2000 09:21 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Devina.. .what can I say?  I'm all yours. . .if I am to be Passions' slave.. . I want you to be my mistress. . .

I really liked this. . .shows the power of love and the power of passion. . . excellent. ..

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Daddy Goose38
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14 posted 05-24-2015 05:07 PM       View Profile for Daddy Goose38   Email Daddy Goose38   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Daddy Goose38

You will never know what it would mena to me to be asked,
So honest, so explicitly, so openly.  Becauses you are doing it, if comforts me to know that it need not be just a fantasy but something even more vivid, and that someone could love and need me like that someday, and that she will make no bones about telling me and asking me.  Can't say more. JM  
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