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Lynn
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since 1999-09-20
Posts 316
Jasper, Alabama U.S.A.

0 posted 2000-02-27 08:47 PM





I'm not afraid of dieing,
but I'm so afraid of crying,
in front of your hard soul.

You wouldn't understand,
how my heart could belong to a man
that has never noticed me.

I couldn't fathom the moment when you,
would come to me with eyes so blue,
and lay me down so gently.

For you have hands that steal,
as you try to make the action real,
but I know you're a lier.

I've seen the damage you have done,
while you're having all the fun,
destroying the hopes of your victims.

So no longer will I learn to hate,
why don't you just masturbate,
and steal your own innocence.  


 If time cannot heal your pain, you can always cry on my shoulder. ~Jenn~

© Copyright 2000 Jennifer Lynn Bonham - All Rights Reserved
Danny Holloway
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since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
1 posted 2000-02-28 04:28 PM


Lynn, you sure have a way of laying it on the line.  Some strong emotions here for sure, even some hurt I as well.
"destroying the hopes of your victums"!  
Bad dude for sure...
Nice write!

Lynn
Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 316
Jasper, Alabama U.S.A.
2 posted 2000-02-28 07:03 PM


Danny,
   Thanks for the comments. There's more hate here than hurt. I've just been noticing how so many guys that I know will ask a girl out sleep with her then dump her. It just makes me really mad...

 If time cannot heal your pain, you can always cry on my shoulder. ~Jenn~

Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

3 posted 2000-02-28 09:52 PM


Hi Lynn! There have been guys like that around since time began...nothing new here. The cure? Don't sleep with them!

Denise

RufffRyder
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since 2000-02-25
Posts 143
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4 posted 2000-02-28 10:02 PM


Lynn I can indeed feel your anger.
However boy`s will be boy`s as sad as that is,it`s the truth.
Not to sound like a dad (although I am)but maybe you should save your heart and the other until your sure that he`s the right one for you.
Thank you fro the read and Good Luck.
P.S. Not all "Boy`s" are like that.

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