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Lynn
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0 posted 02-27-2000 08:47 PM       View Profile for Lynn   Email Lynn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lynn




I'm not afraid of dieing,
but I'm so afraid of crying,
in front of your hard soul.

You wouldn't understand,
how my heart could belong to a man
that has never noticed me.

I couldn't fathom the moment when you,
would come to me with eyes so blue,
and lay me down so gently.

For you have hands that steal,
as you try to make the action real,
but I know you're a lier.

I've seen the damage you have done,
while you're having all the fun,
destroying the hopes of your victims.

So no longer will I learn to hate,
why don't you just masturbate,
and steal your own innocence.  


 If time cannot heal your pain, you can always cry on my shoulder. ~Jenn~
© Copyright 2000 Jennifer Lynn Bonham - All Rights Reserved
Danny Holloway
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since 01-15-2000
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1 posted 02-28-2000 04:28 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Lynn, you sure have a way of laying it on the line.  Some strong emotions here for sure, even some hurt I as well.
"destroying the hopes of your victums"!  
Bad dude for sure...
Nice write!
Lynn
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Jasper, Alabama U.S.A.


2 posted 02-28-2000 07:03 PM       View Profile for Lynn   Email Lynn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lynn

Danny,
   Thanks for the comments. There's more hate here than hurt. I've just been noticing how so many guys that I know will ask a girl out sleep with her then dump her. It just makes me really mad...

 If time cannot heal your pain, you can always cry on my shoulder. ~Jenn~
Denise
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3 posted 02-28-2000 09:52 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Hi Lynn! There have been guys like that around since time began...nothing new here. The cure? Don't sleep with them!

Denise
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4 posted 02-28-2000 10:02 PM       View Profile for RufffRyder   Email RufffRyder   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RufffRyder's Home Page   View IP for RufffRyder

Lynn I can indeed feel your anger.
However boy`s will be boy`s as sad as that is,it`s the truth.
Not to sound like a dad (although I am)but maybe you should save your heart and the other until your sure that he`s the right one for you.
Thank you fro the read and Good Luck.
P.S. Not all "Boy`s" are like that.
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