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Springtime Peace (Repost)*For Denise*
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Springtime Peace (Repost)*For Denise* |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland 
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When the trees are crowned with leaves, And dressed in ribbons fair, The songs of the birds fill the bush, I place the springtime flowers in my hair. I celebrate the coming of Spring, In my own special way, Becoming a part of the beauty, I absorb myself in the day. I can feel the ancient rhythms, Taking hold in my heart, Communing with Nature, Celebrating the season's start. Beneath an endless sky, I feel like the ancient ones, With garlands and ribbons in their hair, Dancing, celebrating, my heart is overrun. Overrun by the unparalelled beauty, That comes but once a year, All the land, trees and plants, Are born anew. I skip along the pathways, Leading down to the sea, Picking wildflowers along the way, The scent of sea air caressing me. I hear the ocean breathe, It exhales upon the shore, It's gentle sounds a melody, No tempest to endure. Listening I know the truth, 'Tween the rocks the wind does wail, I've found the existance of peace, Hiding behind the veil. Beneath the Gravilles flowers, Amidst the native trees, I give you now my thoughts and feelings, And all their mysteries. May the world hug you today, With it's warmth and love. I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart, That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world, Wishing you well and wishing you love...... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Hey, you really outdid yourself on this one. I especially loves these lines, "I hear the ocean breathe," "It exhales upon the shore," I grew up near the ocean and you make me hear it, even though I'm almost 2000 miles away. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Beautifully done Isis...a lilting song! I love this. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Isis you have written so beautifully about this beauty you see. James |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, Isis! Thanks for reposting it for me!  Denise |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
I can smell the ocean!  Isis this was bliss! The best girl, simply the best! |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks everyone, I feel this is one of my few best poems.. Glad you all liked it May the world hug you today, With it's warmth and love. I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart, That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world, Wishing you well and wishing you love...... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Isis~ This is truly beautiful. Spring awash with the images as you've presented them. Lovely. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
A lively testimonial to the Springtide's splendor. Very nice! Claire |
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RufffRyder Member
since 2000-02-25
Posts 143<------Over There------> |
Isis you have givin me a breath of fresh spring air with this piece. Beautiful read. Thank you |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks everyone glad you liked it, it is somehow refreshing isn't it? May the world hug you today, With it's warmth and love. I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart, That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world, Wishing you well and wishing you love...... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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KRex New Member
since 2000-02-27
Posts 6 |
Easily one of the best i have read, this poem allows the reader to see through your eyes and your heart. Very good. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
As always Isis, a perfect and beautiful poem. Reading your piece really has me excited for Spring! Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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