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Poeminister
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since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

0 posted 2000-02-26 11:55 PM



Of your own works

Neither art nor nature
can enhance you more
you are the beauty that I live for

Neither science nor poetry
can discern your deepest side
you are the most cunning stride

Your gentle true touch
is one made of certain love
You are what paradise is made of

I feel such passion with you
such enlightment and liberty
You are my life and destiny

You are of your own works
You are my strong and beautiful lover
and I will never know a better


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Aimster
Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
1 posted 2000-02-27 12:09 PM


~poe

THIS is a true work of art...i hope this person u write of knows how important they are to you. nice poem!

Amy  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~

Meadowmuse
Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263

2 posted 2000-02-27 06:09 AM


Welcome to Passions  
I enjoyed this piece, not only for its content and theme, but for its rhythm...a beautiful sounding poem, rich and resonant when read aloud. As for its theme, what finer devotion could be offered?


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