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Poeminister
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Regina SK; Canada


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Of your own works

Neither art nor nature
can enhance you more
you are the beauty that I live for

Neither science nor poetry
can discern your deepest side
you are the most cunning stride

Your gentle true touch
is one made of certain love
You are what paradise is made of

I feel such passion with you
such enlightment and liberty
You are my life and destiny

You are of your own works
You are my strong and beautiful lover
and I will never know a better

© Copyright 2000 Kevin Rainbow - All Rights Reserved
Aimster
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since 02-19-2000
Posts 4367
Charlotte, NC


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~poe

THIS is a true work of art...i hope this person u write of knows how important they are to you. nice poem!

Amy  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
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Welcome to Passions  
I enjoyed this piece, not only for its content and theme, but for its rhythm...a beautiful sounding poem, rich and resonant when read aloud. As for its theme, what finer devotion could be offered?

 
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