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Whispy Starlight
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Whispy Starlight |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments 
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Threads of whispy starlight Within the shadows spray Luna's wings shine bright Upon the floating rays. The spirits of eternity Mingle with the breeze Here lone hearts can be Within the midnight seas. The pain of past does fly With a gossamer grace Renewed essence fills the sky And lights the earthen face. Moonbathed love does spread Caressing weakened souls The angels make their bed Where the whispy starlight flows. *Krista Knutson* "Every moment marked with apparitions of your soul...." ~*Sarah McLachlan- Do What You Have To Do*~ |
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Dusk Treader
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since 1999-06-18
Posts 1187St. Paul, MN |
Great poem Krista. I enjoyed your imagery and wonderful use of words, as always. Wonderful, my friend. A writer's soul is on paper etched. In flames I shall not be consumed, but reborn. -- Abrahm Simons |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
~Kristy, This is lovely..thanks ever so much for sharing...i love the stars and all of the celestial bodies. The heavens hold many glorious mysteries in them. This poem was one that really made me smile! thanks again. Amy  ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
I feel like I'm floating on gossamer grace after reading this, Alwye. This is breathtakingly beautiful. Splendid poem. michael |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Krista~ This has the most gentle flow. I enjoy the celestial glow that you embodied in it. Very, very alluring. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Thank you all so much for your kindness. *Krista Knutson* "Every moment marked with apparitions of your soul...." ~*Sarah McLachlan- Do What You Have To Do*~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
all your poems have such lovey imagery...this one is a perfect example..very nice... thanks for your kind words to my work as well  take care, janet marie She says baby, It's 3am I must be lonely, When she says baby, Well I can't help but be scared of it all sometimes, Says the rains gonna wash away I believe it. Matchbox20 I love you baby... always.* |
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RufffRyder Member
since 2000-02-25
Posts 143<------Over There------> |
What a beautiful picture you have painted my mind with this one. I thank you for the taking me away from all my thought`s,even if it was just for a moment in time. Very nice read Alwye |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
Krissa... I luv your poems, and you no darn right that I do! I really like this one... "Where the whispy starlight flows." I love that line... so beautiful and so vivid to my mind... it really completes the poem. Great Job! Sometimes the most important things can't be seen with the eyes, but are rather felt with the heart. |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, Krista!! Lovely imagery! Denise |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Thank you all! Ms. Dawn Eclipse- Thanks Cassers. Your last poem got me in the starlight mood, so you inspired this one. *Krista Knutson* "Every moment marked with apparitions of your soul...." ~*Sarah McLachlan- Do What You Have To Do*~ |
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