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Whispy Starlight

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Alwye
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In the space between moments


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Threads of whispy starlight
Within the shadows spray
Luna's wings shine bright
Upon the floating rays.

The spirits of eternity
Mingle with the breeze
Here lone hearts can be
Within the midnight seas.

The pain of past does fly
With a gossamer grace
Renewed essence fills the sky
And lights the earthen face.

Moonbathed love does spread
Caressing weakened souls
The angels make their bed
Where the whispy starlight flows.


 *Krista Knutson*

"Every moment marked with apparitions of your soul...." ~*Sarah McLachlan- Do What You Have To Do*~

© Copyright 2000 Krista Botterill - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 02-26-2000 11:59 PM       View Profile for Dusk Treader   Email Dusk Treader   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dusk Treader

Great poem Krista.  I enjoyed your imagery and wonderful use of words, as always.  Wonderful, my friend.

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2 posted 02-27-2000 12:07 AM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

~Kristy,

This is lovely..thanks ever so much for sharing...i love the stars and all of the celestial bodies. The heavens hold many glorious mysteries in them. This poem was one that really made me smile! thanks again.

Amy  

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3 posted 02-27-2000 01:46 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

I feel like I'm floating on gossamer grace after reading this, Alwye.  This is breathtakingly beautiful.  Splendid poem.


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4 posted 02-27-2000 03:20 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Krista~
This has the most gentle flow.
I enjoy the celestial glow that you
embodied in it.
Very, very alluring.
~*Marge*~


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Thank you all so much for your kindness.  

 *Krista Knutson*

"Every moment marked with apparitions of your soul...." ~*Sarah McLachlan- Do What You Have To Do*~

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6 posted 02-27-2000 09:42 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

all your poems have such lovey imagery...this one is a perfect example..very nice...
thanks for your kind words to my work as well
take care, janet marie

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What a beautiful picture you have painted my mind with this one.
I thank you for the taking me away from all my thought`s,even if it was just for a moment in time.
Very nice read Alwye
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8 posted 02-27-2000 09:56 PM       View Profile for Dawn Eclipse   Email Dawn Eclipse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dawn Eclipse

Krissa...

I luv your poems, and you no darn right that I do!  I really like this one... "Where the whispy starlight flows."  I love that line... so beautiful and so vivid to my mind... it really completes the poem.  Great Job!

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This is beautiful, Krista!!   Lovely imagery!

Denise
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Thank you all!  

Ms. Dawn Eclipse- Thanks Cassers.  Your last poem got me in the starlight mood, so you inspired this one.  


 *Krista Knutson*

"Every moment marked with apparitions of your soul...." ~*Sarah McLachlan- Do What You Have To Do*~

 
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