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An Angel On Earth

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Aimster
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An Angel on Earth


Looking out into the vast black sky
One by one they appear like diamonds on a black satin sheet
Stars...
They sparkle above us, as if to say...you are not alone
In the darkness, I hear the sound of your voice
A warm breeze flows all around me putting me at peace
Time is supsended, the Earth stands still
But it's only my imagination, a illusion of my mind
For you are not there, just images replaying of a former time
Then I once again look up into the heavens
A ray of light decends upon me, and I am surrounded by its brightness
And there you are, a beautiful angel with wings of gold
I look again, but you are gone
Was it reality or was it just my mind playing tricks on me?





 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
© Copyright 2000 Amy Kennedy - All Rights Reserved
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HI AMY
this is beautiful...a lovely vision of the stars...and they are twinkling at us...our loved ones winking(smile)JM

 ...there are places inside all our souls...
that have never been touched...
there are places inside our hearts...
that need to be loved this much...
Janet Marie

*I miss you baby...
I love you, always.*

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Amy it does not matter whether it is our imagination or not as long as it makes us feel at ease and gives us hope that our loved one's are looking down on us and guiding us. I like to believe thay are each and everyone of them the bright stars in the night....lovely poem   tracie. Sweet name you have to, my daughters name is Amy  
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~Janet Marie

You are so sweet! Thank you for your kind words...so glad you "got" my poem lol. And yes I too like to think of our loved ones as the stars in the sky twinkling down above us.

Amy  

~Tracie

Thank you for your response as well! What a lovely name your daughter has *laughs*. All joking aside thanks for reading and responding..  



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4 posted 02-26-2000 09:19 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Amy~
I love this.
I also believe in the ~spirit~ of the stars.
If it's your imagination ....
then mine joins yours !
~*Marge*~


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Aimster, your starry vision bathes the reader in a serene and quiet aire. Very nice.

Claire
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Exceptional poem.  Lovely imagery, Amy.  I felt as if I was right next to you seeing this.  No, it wasn't your imagination.


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~marge,
thank you for your kind words....yes the imagination is the keeper of the souls, at least that's what I think.  
~claire
glad you liked the poem. i look forward to reading your work some more as well.  
~michael,
wow i am touched! thank you ever so much for your comments. i am glad that you "saw" the angel as well. your poetry is an inspiration to us all!

Much hugs and kisses to you ALL...
Amy  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
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Lovely poem you have created

 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

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It was real....wonderful images here  Amy!
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