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Poeminister
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since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

0 posted 2000-02-26 06:22 PM




Words

These are words
simple and true
precious and loving
for all of you
just little messengers
delivering care
just feelings dressed up
in clothes so fair
Some in armour
some in gowns
some like commanders
others like clowns
Many might fail
too timid inside
but many might find victory
with flourishing pride



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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
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Hurricane Alley
1 posted 2000-02-26 06:32 PM


Welcome to the family...I love words...this was a great poem..check your email for a special welcome....  

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2000-02-26 07:04 PM


Very nice poem about the words of the poet.
"It only words and words are all I have to take your heart away." BeeGees

christies heart
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since 1999-08-10
Posts 189
NJ, USA
3 posted 2000-02-27 05:43 AM


Very nice poem!

"just feelings dressed up
in clothes so fair"...

This idea and what you did with it was great!! Christie


 Grant that I may not judge my niegbor until I have walked a mile in his moccasians

Native American prayer



Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
4 posted 2000-02-27 02:31 PM


~Poe

Welcome to Passions   I loved this poem...your creativity shone through. Excellent poem, wonderful idea. Take care.

Amy  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~

Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
5 posted 2000-02-27 03:39 PM


Hi Poeminister,

This was great, look forward to more of your work thanks and welcome to passions.

Cerenity-1

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