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Sweet Delight |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Mounting desire greets my fevered mind as I walk down the candy aisle each M&M, each Milky Way gives rise to my wanton smile Baby Ruth, Pay Day too all beckon me to a taste Snickers bars and Jujube’s that settle around my waist I pass them up for other things like carrots and celery sticks but hear them calling from the shelf those Red Vines and Pixie Stix Halloween is just around the bend so there’s plenty of bags in the store Candy Corn and Cracker Jacks and Peanut Butter Cups galore Then there will be Christmas Candy Canes are a sweet delight Homemade Fudge and Divinity dance in my dreams each night But I leave without a sweet being good for one more day knowing that again I’ve held those ‘candy cravings’ at bay! [This message has been edited by Poet deVine (edited 02-26-2000).] |
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Mistikman Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682San Jose, CA, USA |
Heh, you know my plight all too well PdV  I give in more often than most, only thing keeping me from binging is my empty wallet |
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RufffRyder Member
since 2000-02-25
Posts 143<------Over There------> |
Not going anywhere for awhile? This sure is a sweeeet one. I would like to write more here but I have this sudden urge to run and buy some candy Nice SWEET read PdV. |
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Mistikman Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682San Jose, CA, USA |
Heres an idea from Poet deVine make believe everyone in the forum is a candy and tell what kind they are! Here are a few examples by me and PdV Poet deVine's: Balladeer- A candy of epic proportions WhtDove- candy that will bring you to your knees in prayer Toerag- candy so smelly you wont want to eat it Mistikman- sweet caramel coating.. soft marshmallow heart Mine: Michael- candy that will leave you in awe with its brilliant flavor wayoutwalt- candy that has an interesting flavor, but makes you come back for more Poet deVine- candy that is deceptively strong and uplifting |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Gosh Sharon, this was great. change it to coffee and you have me pegged...lol. Cappachio, Lait's too, Smell the aroma as they brew. French vanilla, Hazelnut, All proclaimed to rot your gut. Help me, help me, What to do? I need my fix, How about you? |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
And don't forget the Christopher Bar! Nothing but nuts! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Awwww....you mean you turned down the Baby Ruth to have your will power |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Poet D this is SO creative and cute...gave me a good laugh...I see we have all the same weaknesses...my dentist loves me LOL great work...thanks for all your relpies to my work. take care, janet marie ...there are places inside all our souls... that have never been touched... there are places inside our hearts... that need to be loved this much... Janet Marie *I miss you baby... I love you, always.* |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Hmmm, I really don't have a problem with passing those up. Every once in a while... Not much of a chocolate person, but I do like M&M's. Great poem Devine! |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
I see you kept them at the Bay Now that is where you shop I say Sweet the poem you done I wish I had your will power So how many did you buy then? The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Great poem, PDV! (But I'd have to disagree with your assessment of Toe! LOL) |
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