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Cerenity
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0 posted 2000-02-26 02:30 PM



I read all of your poems
and do not reply, why?
I thought maybe my replys
would seem not so heart felt
not because I did not love
your words, but the hard
knocks that life gives us
at what seems to be when we
feel were just about to stand
on our own two feet have hit
again. No I'm not going to let
this get me, The sun is out and
the feeling in the air is fresh
and clean, so I to shall look
at all of this stuff that seems
to pop up as just hard knocks
that in time will go away.
Your poems are so conforting
and I thank you for putting
them out there for me to read.

Just thoughts I needed to share.

Cerenity-1

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1 posted 2000-02-26 05:58 PM


Thank you for sharing!
tracie66
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2 posted 2000-02-26 09:19 PM


Cerenity your thoughts are beautiful and gracious the poem was wonderful...tracie  
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3 posted 2000-02-26 09:48 PM


*HUG*
~*Marge*~


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4 posted 2000-02-28 11:16 AM


Lovely sentiments, Cerenity! Lovely poem!

Denise

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