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tulip
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0 posted 02-26-2000 02:18 PM       View Profile for tulip   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for tulip

Where do I go from here, I say,
do I continue to strive, or walk away?

I've worked so hard, and given my all.
I'm tired, and worn, and starting to fall.

My focus has gone, and I'm starting to feel,
that the time that I've given, is not a good deal.

I've seen things, I never thought that I would,
I've learned to handle the things that I could.

I'm scared to go off on my own,
I depend alot on what you've shown.

My life has changed in every sense.
This one more aspect knocks my balance.

Where do I go from here, I say,
do I continue to strive, or walk away?



© Copyright 2000 tulip - All Rights Reserved
RufffRyder
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<------Over There------>


1 posted 02-26-2000 03:20 PM       View Profile for RufffRyder   Email RufffRyder   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RufffRyder's Home Page   View IP for RufffRyder

Continue to move forward and when your feeling like you can`t give anymore,look into your heart and you`ll find the strength.
Sad,yet well said read
tulip
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2 posted 02-26-2000 07:55 PM       View Profile for tulip   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for tulip

Ruffryder,
You're right, I'm surprised at how many times I've thought I couldn't continue, and yet I always do!  Thanks for the reply!
Aimster
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3 posted 02-26-2000 08:18 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

~Tulip

*cheers* to you! just be recongnizing that there are many challenges in life is half the battle. Look within your heart and soul and you will realize you have many answers. And when the tough gets going, you'll be surprised for sure how far you can go. And the days you still feel as though you cant go on, trust in the Lord or whatever faith you have, but most importantly believe in yourself

amy  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
tulip
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4 posted 02-27-2000 02:46 PM       View Profile for tulip   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for tulip

Aimster,
Thank you.  I do believe in myself, but I'm very tired and worn out.  I wonder how I continue to go on sometimes...
Alle'cram
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5 posted 02-28-2000 06:31 AM       View Profile for Alle'cram   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alle'cram

I felt your emotions in your well crafted words. The time you gave was no waste-don't
make a decision in haste; Refocus and consider yourself-when balanced, look out for yourself.
Really Good
Alle'Cram
Denise
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6 posted 02-28-2000 12:09 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Great poem, Tulip! Very well written.

Denise
Miss.Queeny
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7 posted 02-28-2000 04:50 PM       View Profile for Miss.Queeny   Email Miss.Queeny   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Miss.Queeny

Tulip ( great name )

A lovely poem which is very honest and emotional. Remember that no-one makes you, and be dependent or no-one.

Love, Q xxx
tulip
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8 posted 02-29-2000 01:18 AM       View Profile for tulip   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for tulip

Alle',
I made a very haste decision, but one I knew was the "right" decision.
Denise,
Thank you, as always...
Miss Queeny,
I'm standing alone right now, but my loyalty is in the right place.  I've just never felt so alone standing for what I believe in.

Just so you all know, this has to do with work, not a relationship.  
mete out
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9 posted 03-01-2000 08:38 AM       View Profile for mete out   Email mete out   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mete out

Keep on writing.
Keep on fighting.

A fantastic poem....I'll be looking out for more of your work.    


 I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it.


[This message has been edited by mete out (edited 03-02-2000).]
January Flowers
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10 posted 03-01-2000 08:44 AM       View Profile for January Flowers   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for January Flowers

FULL-SPEED AHEAD!  This is a very sad poem, Tulip, but it sounds as though you have the answer already...you keep moving forward!  
Parker
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Tulip, a wonderful poem..... I would say always go forward, and no matter what never give in.

Parker
SEA
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with you


12 posted 03-01-2000 12:06 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Tulip~ believe in yourself and your own abilities!You'll do great!   -SEA
Meadowmuse
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13 posted 03-01-2000 12:14 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

Good poem, Tulip. Standing up for what one believes and knows to be right is often such a challenge, but one of integrity and strength, and you can take comfort in knowing you have both.

~ Claire
tulip
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14 posted 03-03-2000 12:22 AM       View Profile for tulip   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for tulip

Mete,
Thank you.
JF,
I think I should be slowing down a bit...it's getting shaky going full force..
but I will move forward.
Haleyja,
I won't budge an inch on this one.  Thank you!
Sea,
Thank you, I always apprecieate what you have to say.
Meadow,
It's a challenge I never expected, only making things more difficult.  You think you have all you can handle, and boom, something else happens!!!
 
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