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Marilyn
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since 1999-09-26
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0 posted 2000-02-26 02:15 PM


My love is here,
My love is true.
There is no one,
In my heart but you.

I want to spend,
My whole life through.
To share all things,
That come, with you.

I'd give my heart,
My soul and life.
To save your heart,
From any strife.

I'll be for you,
All you are for me.
Because of you,
I've been set free.

To have, to hold,
Throught thick and thin.
I make these vows,
As life begins.

I will be here,
By your side.
Until death does end,
This life long ride.

Forever yours,
And yours alone.
I make this vow,
My heart is shown.

I wish to be,
Within your life.
Beside you ever,
As your wife.

© Copyright 2000 Marilyn - All Rights Reserved
Poet deVine
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1 posted 2000-02-26 02:18 PM


Very touching!

But who's the lucky guy?

BTW - my challenge is posted in Announcements...  

[This message has been edited by Poet deVine (edited 02-26-2000).]

WhtDove
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2 posted 2000-02-26 02:19 PM


Well Marilyn, who is it?  Care to tell?

Great poem my friend!  

RufffRyder
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3 posted 2000-02-26 02:27 PM


Now THAT`S what TRUE LOVE is all about!!!
Thank`s for the breath of FRESH AIR.


Balladeer
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4 posted 2000-02-26 05:01 PM


Ah, Marilyn.....but don't beat around the bush. Say what you mean !

Wonderful poem, my girl.

Rex Allen McCoy
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5 posted 2000-02-26 07:27 PM


Marilyn ... I'm so happy for you ... Wow!!!

Please, fill us in  

Marilyn
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6 posted 2000-02-26 08:14 PM


Ah guys... I guess my artistic talent shone through on this one..lol. There is no man in my life (not a real life one anyway).
Sharon posted a challenge and I decided to give it a go. If I were to ask someone to marry me on the 29th of Feb. this is how I would do it.

Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2000-02-26 10:33 PM


Marilyn~
Had 'em going there gal !
This was lovely.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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WhtDove
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8 posted 2000-02-26 10:50 PM


Well if it were a real person, I'd say this one way heck of a way to ask someone!

 <*\\\><

There's only two ways you can go...
One way you can save your riches,
And the other will save your soul.
Rich Mullins

Michael
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9 posted 2000-02-27 01:17 AM


There's nothing more a man could ask for.  Beautiful poem, Marilyn.

Michael

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10 posted 2000-02-27 03:26 AM


hey, can't think of a better way  
HelmutB
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11 posted 2000-02-27 04:11 AM


All i can say
Beautiful the poem that is
And lucky the guy whoever it is
Nice poem

 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.


Nan
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12 posted 2000-02-27 08:39 AM


Way to go, Marilyn - Go for it - He'll be lucky to have you...
Grandma Jo
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13 posted 2000-02-27 06:19 PM


Whoever it will be, he will be a very LUCKY man indeed! Good stuff Marilyn.
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