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Response ti PdV's challenge

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Marilyn
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0 posted 02-26-2000 02:15 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Marilyn

My love is here,
My love is true.
There is no one,
In my heart but you.

I want to spend,
My whole life through.
To share all things,
That come, with you.

I'd give my heart,
My soul and life.
To save your heart,
From any strife.

I'll be for you,
All you are for me.
Because of you,
I've been set free.

To have, to hold,
Throught thick and thin.
I make these vows,
As life begins.

I will be here,
By your side.
Until death does end,
This life long ride.

Forever yours,
And yours alone.
I make this vow,
My heart is shown.

I wish to be,
Within your life.
Beside you ever,
As your wife.
© Copyright 2000 Marilyn - All Rights Reserved
Poet deVine
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1 posted 02-26-2000 02:18 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Very touching!

But who's the lucky guy?

BTW - my challenge is posted in Announcements...  

[This message has been edited by Poet deVine (edited 02-26-2000).]
WhtDove
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2 posted 02-26-2000 02:19 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Well Marilyn, who is it?  Care to tell?

Great poem my friend!  
RufffRyder
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3 posted 02-26-2000 02:27 PM       View Profile for RufffRyder   Email RufffRyder   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RufffRyder's Home Page   View IP for RufffRyder

Now THAT`S what TRUE LOVE is all about!!!
Thank`s for the breath of FRESH AIR.

Balladeer
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4 posted 02-26-2000 05:01 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Ah, Marilyn.....but don't beat around the bush. Say what you mean !

Wonderful poem, my girl.
Rex Allen McCoy
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5 posted 02-26-2000 07:27 PM       View Profile for Rex Allen McCoy   Email Rex Allen McCoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rex Allen McCoy's Home Page   View IP for Rex Allen McCoy

Marilyn ... I'm so happy for you ... Wow!!!

Please, fill us in  
Marilyn
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6 posted 02-26-2000 08:14 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

Ah guys... I guess my artistic talent shone through on this one..lol. There is no man in my life (not a real life one anyway).
Sharon posted a challenge and I decided to give it a go. If I were to ask someone to marry me on the 29th of Feb. this is how I would do it.
Marge Tindal
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7 posted 02-26-2000 10:33 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Marilyn~
Had 'em going there gal !
This was lovely.
~*Marge*~


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WhtDove
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8 posted 02-26-2000 10:50 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Well if it were a real person, I'd say this one way heck of a way to ask someone!

 <*\\\><

There's only two ways you can go...
One way you can save your riches,
And the other will save your soul.
Rich Mullins
Michael
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9 posted 02-27-2000 01:17 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

There's nothing more a man could ask for.  Beautiful poem, Marilyn.

Michael
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10 posted 02-27-2000 03:26 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

hey, can't think of a better way  
HelmutB
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11 posted 02-27-2000 04:11 AM       View Profile for HelmutB   Email HelmutB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HelmutB's Home Page   View IP for HelmutB

All i can say
Beautiful the poem that is
And lucky the guy whoever it is
Nice poem

 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

Nan
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12 posted 02-27-2000 08:39 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Way to go, Marilyn - Go for it - He'll be lucky to have you...
Grandma Jo
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13 posted 02-27-2000 06:19 PM       View Profile for Grandma Jo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Grandma Jo

Whoever it will be, he will be a very LUCKY man indeed! Good stuff Marilyn.
 
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