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Love Is (Since Danny got me thinkin')
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Love Is (Since Danny got me thinkin') |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California 
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LOVE IS Love is beauty beyond the eye, Cirrus clouds afloat on the sky. A rainbow on your darkest day, A touch that tells you, "it's o.k." Invisible arms that keep you warm, That hold you tight amidst life's storm. A smile by the grace of dawn, The sweetest vision ever drawn. A fluttering heart, a gentle hand, A soul you know and understand. A wisp of dream, a priceless worth, Love is, truly, Heaven on Earth. Love is intrigue, love is romance. Love is a gliding moonlight dance. Love is compassion beyond need Love is within us all - a seed. Nurtured, it blooms, becomes a flower. A fragrance sweet, and yet a power. A strength you can rely upon, As soundless as the silver swan. Love is forgiving, understanding, Ne'er expecting, nor demanding. Love is patient, kind, and pure. Tantalizing, yet demure. A wish, a hope, a dream, a sigh, A shooting star across the sky An undying timeless endeavor For when found true, Love is forever. Michael Anderson Thank you Danny - for the inspiration. [This message has been edited by Michael (edited 02-26-2000).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Michael, A little inflated, But wonderfully stated. A beautiful poem. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
This is so touching Michael and so beautifully written. I think this is the vision we all see in true love...and you have captured it so well. "love is within us all, a seed" --wonderful! |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
An undying timeless endeavor For if found true, Love is forever. This is true ... and you can see this in a person ... it stands out like a neon sign for all to see ... if you can't see this in a person you love ... then chances are the relationship will fail ... when you hold each other and cry tears of joy for each other ( just because ) ... you know you've found each other Rex}<{{{{o> |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
~Michael... you continue to amaze me with your work! This poem was both powerful and thought provoking (at least to me) Thanks for sharing! Amy  ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
A wonderful declaration Michael- only those that have ever found true love can fully appreciate your poem...beautiful images!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
"A fluttering heart, a gentle hand, A soul you know and understand. A wisp of dream, a priceless worth, Love is, purely, Heaven on Earth."... "Love is forgiving, understanding, Ne'er expecting, nor demanding. Love is patient, kind, and pure. Tantalizing, yet demure." ahhh,this poem is like Heaven on Earth too... poerty in motion, once again. ...there are places inside all our souls... that have never been touched... there are places inside our hearts... that need to be loved this much... Janet Marie *I miss you baby... I love you, always.* |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Michael, I think you've summed it up with perfection! This is the most beautiful way I've seen love portrayed! EXCELLENT! |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
This is an excellent poem. It sums up the love between my husband and myself, better than I have done, though I've tried endlessly. This poem speaks of a love very rare and wonderful, and says it beautifully. |
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RufffRyder Member
since 2000-02-25
Posts 143<------Over There------> |
Love can be as close as your next heart beat or as distant as the star`s above. Nice read Michael [This message has been edited by RufffRyder (edited 02-26-2000).] |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Michael, you just can't stop these gems. Keep them coming. Somewhere you said freeverse is tough for you. I'm sure you can put them together. Keep writing, stretch yourself, you have tha talent. Parker |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Excellent Michael... Love is forgiving, understanding, Ne'er expecting, nor demanding. Love is patient, kind, and pure. Tantalizing, yet demure. How true these four lines!! Beautiful Michael. What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Terrific writing, Michael. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Great poem Michael, I loved it alot... tracie |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Michael~ Just super. Glad you were 'thinkin' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Michael, Once again you write a marvelous poem, does your mind ever get tired? It doesn't start sending you messages like overload to much input to format into output...LOL You must have genius status in there. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Michael, A very thoroughly eloquent interpretation of love--I love it! |
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Michael
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Sy, Inflated? Hmmm...Could be. I can not honestly say love is a feeling I've "shared" with anyone though the few times I felt I was in love this is what I honestly felt. I think Rex knows what I'm talking about, "when you hold each other and cry tears of joy for each other ( just because ) ... you know you've found each other". That's what I was trying to capture here. Martie, a vision not realized often enough I think. Rex, Bingo! You know exactly what I'm talking about. Devina, I wonder if there's any hope left for the rest of us? Rosemary, you are very lucky to experiance such a love. I stand envious. Parker, I appreciate the vote of confidence on my freeverse. I don't go there often but I will continue to try to expand. Once I feel comfortable there, who knows? Marge, doesn't happen much...LOL Glad you enjoyed. Gloria, I think it's when my brain overloads that I pick up the pen to let some of it out actually. Don't feel too much like a genious right now, though. If I were, maybe I would know first hand what it's like to be truly loved and not just have to specualte. Everyone else, a sincere thank you for all your replies. Michael [This message has been edited by Michael (edited 02-26-2000).] |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
This is awe inspiring, Michael! And this feeling you describe, it's really what keeps us going, isn't it? Without it, we seek it, with it, we hold on to it desperately... One of your best here, me thinks. Corinne |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Michael...this is beautiful. It's amazing how love can be so many different things and so different for each person. You've captured the essence well |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You've done a great job describing the indescribable! *S* This is beautiful! [This message has been edited by suthern (edited 02-28-2000).] |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Another excellent piece Michael. Love is.. Reading your poetry filled with emotion and true feeling. |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Another beautiful poem, Michael! Denise |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
This is an awesome work, Michael, singing the comforts of true love. |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Michael, what can I say.....you are the Master! Well done.....and just let me know when you need inspiration and I will serve it up. Thanks for the mention! D |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Michael: I guess that's why we call it magic.. HUSG Live in my heart and pay no rent... |
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