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A piece of Art (Perhaps the best Art ever made)
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A piece of Art (Perhaps the best Art ever made) |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
A piece of Art A piece of art is what I see Where would I be without thee I could reveal how much I love I could whisper you are my Dove But what would I be If I do that to thee A piece of art is what I see What would I be without thee I could say I do not feel I could say that this is not real But where would I be If I do that to thee A piece of art is what I see And wonder If she understands me A piece of art is what I see A friend I always will be I say…you need me, I am there I say…you call, I come running from anywhere That what I will be A friend that will be true for thee I'm very sorry that my time is limited. I hope you all will forgive me. Working way too much and miss you all so terrible The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
HelmutB, An emotional piece, I enjoyed the read. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lovely friendship words, Helmut. Liked the thought of a piece of art, since you are such a great artist. I have missed seeing your poetry and your sweet replies. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
We miss ya too, Helmut. But don't spend too much time away - I'll come looking for you!!! Love the poem, I don't know if it's how you intended it but this makes me think of how we percieve others we "love". Are they trophies? Something we just add to our "art" collection? Do we really ever hear them? Michael |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Helmut ... you sure know how to capture a reader ... you've created a work of art about a work of art and I can't help but think that she'll understand you  Rex}<{{{{o> |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
You've captured my interest with this one Helmut!! Art is the ultimate expression of love and friendship...besides poetry of course!!! Take care sweetie...no forgetting about us, you hear???  XXOOOpen arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Helmut....this speaks so loudly to me. I am posting a poem in response to this for you. Thank you my dear friend. Hugs and Love Ruth |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Thank you all for your beautiful replies Michael No there not trophies. What I meant to say by using the word Art is: That the person is very special. One you love and cherish for just what they are and not what you want them to be. Like I cherish your friendship The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Helmut, you are MY piece of art! LOL I cherish your friendship, as with many others here! Thank you for such a beautiful piece of art ! Bravo!! I know how it feels when your time is limited, but I know you'll always be around....Thank you. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
We are all works of Art....especially you Helmut! Thank you for reminding us... |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Helmut you have such a way with words! Wonderful it is! Hope your back soooooon! |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Helmut, assuming that you are not referring to Linkletter or Carney, this is an excellent poem! Good to see you around. |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
poetFemmeFatale Thank you My Lady, I can only say so are you. Poet deVine There are some special pieces of art and your one of them, not to minimize the value of others. Everyone of you is special in his/her own way to me. WhtDove Thank you so much, You touched my heart. I will do the best I can. Balladeer Thank you Sir, you also have a very special corner in my heart. And sorry for asking but who is Linkletter and Carney? The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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