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Le Metro
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Le Metro |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL 
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Le Metro The relentless sea pounding on shores washing lives away with waves to distant locations making us all driftwood deposited here and there waiting for the waves to return. Robert |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Inspiring words.. I lay here in this distant shore awaiting another tide useless in my wandering life my tears I must hide |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
~Robert I sense much longing in this poem. Thank you for sharing this lovely piece of work with all of us. Amy  ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
The sea, relentless...choosing our alightings and repositionings...so often it feels as though this is true. A lovely concept, rather saddening, expressed very well, Robert. Claire |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
Poet deVine....what a wonderful feeling you give me in those words. Amy thanks.....so very much Claire....the sea is such a great medium for poetry...even if I was inspired by the Paris Metro while waiting for the next train. Robert |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Thanks for explaining where the title came from. Whatever the title, this is a beautiful thought Liz |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Great poem, Robert! Inspiration can come at the most unlikely times, can't it?! Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Oh...very nice |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
 }Waiting for the metro felt like being a part of a wave that was carrying me to someplace that I had not any control over. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RobertB~ 'making us all driftwood deposited here and there' An ocean of emotion in this. Brilliant, no matter what inspired it. Just the thought of driftwood deposited on the shore .... makes me wistful for the turning of the tide. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is NICE RobertB, your work practically comes with a guaranty, sure to please... |
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