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I Am But The Sculptor's Clay
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I Am But The Sculptor's Clay |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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I Am But The Sculptor's Clay ~Marge Tindal~ By now I know I'm not infallible. My emotions raw, my feelings malleable. Feeling like I've been putty in the hands of a friend. Shaped and pulled in all directions seeking now my true reflection. Bold new colors do I see when plied and shaped with hands so soft, working their magic on me. The sculptor of my being very much in control. The shape that I've taken, no longer out of control. Fingerprints, you've left behind shaped and carved upon my mind. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
It might be nice to be a sculptors's clay, depending on who the artist is. Wonderful little poem, but Marge, no one can mold you into anyone but who you are, nor would they want to Liz |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sometimes we curve to the need of another and loose ourselves, but only momentarily. No one can change the core of who we are. The sculptor of my being very much in control. The shape that I've taken, no longer out of control. Wonderful poem! |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
The Sculptor has much work to do on me, Marge, I'm one tough piece of clay to mold. What a wonderful analogy. Good poem. michael |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Well, Marge, you needn't be perplexed I know you're really statuesque I have no doubt that you've been told When they made you they broke the mold I feel that I would have it all If your bust were on my pedestal!  |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Another Masterpiece my friend |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Elizabeth, my friend~ You're a sweetie. Martie~ You are right ! I am ME ! BUT, I've had help from the sculptor. Michael~ Sweetheart, the Sculptor just isn't finished with you yet ... you'll end up a Masterpiece ! Balladeer~ Oh, they threw away the mold alright ! You are incorrigible ! (and I love it !) I'll settle for the front seat of the Mercedes. Tee Hee ! Hoot~ Thanks, girlfriend ! ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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RufffRyder Member
since 2000-02-25
Posts 143<------Over There------> |
From what I`ve seen of your work,I would say that the Sculptor has created a Masterpiece. Nice read Marge. |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Marge, this is wonderful. I sculpt in clay, so I know all too well this feeling. I too, wish someone would make something "nice" of me! LOL I feel like a big blob of nothing at times...  I would rather be a flower pot than a nothing! hehe Thanks for the read mam... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LOL ... PoetFemme~ I didn't know you sculpt. Great artistry that I admire. A flower pot huh? Well, here's hoping ..... ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Fingerprints, you've left behind shaped and carved upon my mind. Marge, this is excellent...you always sum up everything so perfectly with your words. I read all your work in here, but by the time I get to em theres already 20plus replies...your so popular  ..anyway...thank you MUCH for your many kind replies to my work in the various forums...you always make me smile, take care, janet marie...there are places inside all our souls... that have never been touched... there are places inside our hearts... that need to be loved this much... Janet Marie *I miss you baby... I love you, always.* |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
This is great, I wonder if were ever done being sculpted, seems there's always another detail that could be added to enhance the outcome and benefit others. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JanetMarie~ Thank you so much for that lovely compliment. Gosh, don't let a few replies ahead of you keep you from letting me know if something I write touches you in some way. I definitely reply more than I write. The works of others give me so much inspiration. I write from my heart and am eternally thankful that my messages reach other hearts. Again, I thank you. LostDreamer~ Well, I think you hit on an interesting point. I doubt the sculptor is ever through with us. At least I hope not. I am touched my the hands of many and so far no one has 'baked' me. Now that might be the pits ! LOL ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Fingerprints, you've left behind shaped and carved upon my mind. It's says it all Marge I love it what you have done there Beautiful But who am I telling here The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Helmut~ No one I'd rather hear it from, dear. Thank you for liking this one. I hope your day has 'joy beyond compare'. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Exquisite, Marge! Corinne |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is indeed beautiful, Marge!!  Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Corinne~ Thank you for liking. Makes me happy. Denise~ You too gal. Love you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bipity Bumpity Boo  For friend~  ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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