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Waking Up

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christies heart
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0 posted 02-26-2000 07:16 AM       View Profile for christies heart   Email christies heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for christies heart

I have been sleeping in a bubble of steel,
forgetting the allure of the wind.
I have been lurking in places one cannot feel.
I think it's time to wake up.

The sun on my face, your eyes holding my gaze,
little pieces of wonder in my world.
I see sounds and sights as I am free of the haze.
I think I am waking up.

Turning away from the heat of your soul
pushing you far from my thoughts.
There's danger in knowing my being's not whole.
I think I'll go back to sleep.




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Janet Marie
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1 posted 02-26-2000 01:32 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

The sun on my face, your eyes holding my gaze,
little pieces of wonder in my world.
I see sounds and sights as I am free of the haze.
I think I am waking up.

beautiful C, just like the poet that wrote it(smile)
thank you for your sweet reply to my poem, and for the inspiration as well.
Your poetry has such a lovely quality about it.Your very gifted. take care, janet marie


 ...there are places inside all our souls...
that have never been touched...
there are places inside our hearts...
that need to be loved this much...
Janet Marie

*I miss you baby...
I love you, always.*

Aimster
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2 posted 02-26-2000 01:57 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

~Christy

This is indeed lovely! Your poems are both inspiring and emotional. This one especially hit home for me. Thanks ever so much for sharing.

Amy  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
Dark Angel
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3 posted 02-26-2000 04:59 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

WOW, this is great!!! especially loved the last Stanza! Well Done!  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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