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Waking Up
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Waking Up |
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christies heart Member
since 1999-08-10
Posts 189NJ, USA |
I have been sleeping in a bubble of steel, forgetting the allure of the wind. I have been lurking in places one cannot feel. I think it's time to wake up. The sun on my face, your eyes holding my gaze, little pieces of wonder in my world. I see sounds and sights as I am free of the haze. I think I am waking up. Turning away from the heat of your soul pushing you far from my thoughts. There's danger in knowing my being's not whole. I think I'll go back to sleep.  [This message has been edited by christies heart (edited 02-26-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The sun on my face, your eyes holding my gaze, little pieces of wonder in my world. I see sounds and sights as I am free of the haze. I think I am waking up. beautiful C, just like the poet that wrote it(smile) thank you for your sweet reply to my poem, and for the inspiration as well. Your poetry has such a lovely quality about it.Your very gifted. take care, janet marie ...there are places inside all our souls... that have never been touched... there are places inside our hearts... that need to be loved this much... Janet Marie *I miss you baby... I love you, always.* |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
~Christy This is indeed lovely! Your poems are both inspiring and emotional. This one especially hit home for me. Thanks ever so much for sharing. Amy  ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
WOW, this is great!!! especially loved the last Stanza! Well Done! What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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