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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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Moonbeams. Sparkle in your eyes shimmer boundlessly Illuminated by faint twilight twinkling endlessly. Daisy trails lead us through infinite space Watching time go by and our past erase. Moonbeams there for you and for me Shedding lustre ever so dreamily Our hearts shine and our souls divine. Oh and lay me down read to me the poetry Of our love passionately continuously. Let live the reality the scene's of my mind You and me forever entwined. Dark Angel 2000 What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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christies heart Member
since 1999-08-10
Posts 189NJ, USA |
Awsome!!!! Grant that I may not judge my niegbor until I have walked a mile in his moccasians Native American prayer |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Absolutely lovely! Such imagery... this is one of your best DA!! |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Dark Angel, this is a wonderful piece, it sparkles in the moonlight. Parker |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Wonderfully done. Enjoyed muchly. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Christies heart, thank you!  ----------------- Sharon, thank you so very much for your lovely compliment! ----------------- Halejya, thank you for your lovely reply ----------------- Thank you Mike, glad you enjoyed it. What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Absolutely beautiful....may your nights always be filled with moonbeams |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DarkAngel~ How beautiful ..... 'Let live the reality the scene's of my mind You and me forever entwined.' How very beautiful. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
DA this was perfectly beautiful! Woohoo girl! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Oh and lay me down read to me the poetry Of our love passionately continuously. Let live the reality the scene's of my mind You and me forever entwined. ooh I love this mystical, sensual poem..very nice...take care, janet marie ...there are places inside all our souls... that have never been touched... there are places inside our hearts... that need to be loved this much... Janet Marie *I miss you baby... I love you, always.* |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Beautiful work....your words sparkle within my mind. Impressive work. *Krista Knutson* "Every moment marked with apparitions of your soul...." ~*Sarah McLachlan- Do What You Have To Do*~ |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Wow...what a soft, sweet poem. This is so beautiful. *wistful sighs* Michael |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Ruth hun, Thank you so very much. ----------------- Marge, thank you for your lovely reply ----------------- Angel, Thanks sweetie!! ----------------- Janet Marie, thank you so very much! ----------------- Alwye, thank you!! ----------------- Michael, thank you!! What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
WOW DA - this is a beautiful piece of writing. Well done. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
DA. . . you have always known how settings like this can get to me. .. very beautiful. . . very wonderful. .. --------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
This is sooo beautiful! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Moonshine, thank you, so glad you liked it! ----------------- Sven, thank you very much. ----------------- Martie, thank you for yor lovely reply. What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, Dark Angel! Denise |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
The angel casts another moonbeam on a page of poetry. How lovely Liz |
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