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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2000-02-26 05:49 AM


nope. I am not observational.
I tend to be more conversational.
I do not tend to rules of game.
(Boiling crawfish in the rain,
to me, it tasted all the same...)

So waitress, please, another beer...
think i'm gonna like it here.
I feel a touch of evil grin--
someone please--fill me in--AGAIN.


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christies heart
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since 1999-08-10
Posts 189
NJ, USA
1 posted 2000-02-26 06:04 AM


Great job. A fun poem!!!! : :  

 Grant that I may not judge my niegbor until I have walked a mile in his moccasians

Native American prayer



Nurse Crachet
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since 1999-09-27
Posts 318
They know where I am!
2 posted 2000-02-26 08:19 AM


Not sure what you want to hear, but I will try to answer without writing a story...LOL
Anyway we are a few people just having fun with our silly creative side, it's kind of like interactive poetry. We follow what's going on to write are next poem and we respond to the poems following the theme. It's actually quite fun, and you are more than welcome to join us, the more the merrier.

Justin Kace
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since 1999-09-13
Posts 82
Oz
3 posted 2000-02-26 09:22 AM


Justin Kace you'd like to know
You Justin Quire here...
We'll tell you all, or mostly so
While you are sipping beer

Hear Justin Toxicated's call
He's Justin Thyme for tea
You'll see within the 'stute's fine wall
There's no serenity

Lady in Red
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 147

4 posted 2000-02-26 01:27 PM


serenity dear
please do not fear
to ask when you want to know
what goes on in our show
hope you'll see through your ale
the Lady in Red has e-mail




 Romeo, Romeo, where fart art thou


Justin Nuendo
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since 2000-02-05
Posts 86
Ozzz
5 posted 2000-02-27 03:26 PM


I already thought I smelled boiled crawfish ! Yummy !Delicious with a beer and some purple mushrooms ! No ! No ! Save the ears for Vinny ! Hiya Missy ! Nice to meet ya ! Wanna share a beer with me ?

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
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6 posted 2000-02-28 12:58 PM


Gratefully laughing, nay--JOYOUSLY  feeling--
I wish i could write well enough to convey the very idea...Thanks to the stute...

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