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beowulf_26
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since 1999-06-29
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0 posted 2000-02-25 10:08 PM



Ho hum drum,
I sit on my thumb,
Wasting my life away.

Would you like larger fries?
How ‘bout super-size?
I can’t stand another day.

I have to go.
You say no
Because…

I must take
For your sake.
You get the steak.

Throw me the crumbs.
Say that I’m dumb.
My moment will come.

When I order you
To make my food.
Goodbye…

Have a nice day.

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Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
1 posted 2000-02-25 10:11 PM


Written with such poise..sounds like its time to move on! Cheers to you, and hope your future is filled with lots of happy days!

~AMY~  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~

January Flowers
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since 2000-02-01
Posts 209
South Carolina
2 posted 2000-02-25 10:11 PM


Did you know that HOTWHEELS once came in the McDonald's Happy Meals?

LOL...cute poem with a sideways look at "have a nice day".  

beowulf_26
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since 1999-06-29
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3 posted 2000-02-26 05:44 AM


Thanks for all the kind words.  Ironically, during my winter break I've worked 40 hours already and I'm heading that way now, again!  Thanx again.

 Opinions are like bellybuttons: eveybody's got 'em and they're good for nothing.

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