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The Jackal
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0 posted 2000-02-25 09:28 PM


enjoy the nobody..and the nothing
keeps good company
or so im told
and the lonely is that one constant
which refuses to grow old
im the butterfly in the path
swipe me away
and there will never be
any questions asked..

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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2000-02-25 10:30 PM


This just tugs at my spirit...like the feeling that I've forgotten something.  Haunting and still sweet...a little bit
moody, like me...(Serenity smiled, serenely.)

I like, very much.

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2 posted 2000-02-26 12:45 PM


Ah, but you tickle my fancy lighting there on the path.
I like it.
~*MArge*~


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Hurricane Alley
3 posted 2000-02-26 06:45 AM


Ah...do we just swipe that butterfly without looking at it or considering how it might feel? Good poem.
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