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If My Pen Were Magic
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If My Pen Were Magic |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California 
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IF MY PEN WERE MAGIC I was once told my pen must be magic, I assure you those words were wrong. For life today wouldn't seem so tragic If I could change it with a song. The first word I'd write would be Peace, That brotherly love be felt by all. All violence in the world would cease, As would fear in soft footfall. Hope would be the very next word, That all may hold a dream. One they could follow, self-assured, Ambitious eyes agleam. I'd probably write Faith after that, The evidence of things not seen. That none might question where we're at All truths holding serene. The last thing I would write about Would probably be Love . Not the kind you fall in or out, The kind you'll only find above. That all may know "magic" within, That all may laugh and smile. That the world stand in unison Every life seen as worthwhile. But words are mere words, I'm just a man, My pen will soon run dry. But to know Peace, Hope, Faith, Love - His plan There lies a magic that'll never die. Michael Anderson |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Amen, Michael~ I feel that these are 'magic' words of truth that fell from your pen. Mere man ... with visions to share. Thank you, Michael. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
~Michael I felt this poem with my whole heart. You have surely left an impact one me. This poem was written with such elegance and poetic justice! Thank you for sharing!! You truly are a kind soul who has a lot to offer the world. Amy  ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Michael, you have written eloquently of something true and beautiful. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Michael, darlin'...your pen IS magic...it makes smiles and tears appear everytime it touches down... this one is perfect and shows your heart...and poetic wisdom...it is SO beautiful and joins "Yesterdays Angel" on my cherished list. take care Janet Marie ...there are places inside all our souls... that have never been touched... there are places inside our hearts... that need to be loved this much... Janet Marie *I miss you baby... I love you, always.* |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Michael....what can I say except that I wish your pen were magic...if it were, the world would truly be a better place |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Michael, believe me, your pen is magic, you write with such sincerity. This is a beautiful magical poem. Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Micheal, this leaves me without words....this is too beautiful, too magical for words |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Michael I do hope your pen is magic, for it should never run dry.... Tracie |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Just this, thank you. Incredible Michael. I'm printing this one for my 'special book.' |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Beautiful thoughts and wonderful poem Liz |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Words that the majority hold to I think - funny how we all seem to want these, yet the world is in such strife. Great poem. K'Writing sharpens life; life enriches writing' Sylvia Plath |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
You speak nothing short of the truth with this one Michael...but I still think your pen is magic!!!  Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
A pen is a pen. Michael. The magic is in the hand that holds it.....and your hand is full of it.....magic. |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Michael - With this gift you have, I know your pen will never run dry....What a beautifully written piece of poetry...thank you so much for sharing it. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Magic comes from within, and takes many forms. This poem casts an enchanting conjuration, Michael! |
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January Flowers Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 209South Carolina |
YOU GOT THAT RIGHT! This is an excellent example of "Power in Poetry". I love the message here, in it's seperation from the tedious happenings in our day to day life. "PEACE" overall, "HOPE" overall, "FAITH" overall and mostly, "LOVE" of that whom is always above us. B E A U T I F U L!  |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Well I had this thought, and I see, medowmuse said it for me. Alright well I tried to add to that with a short poem, but it's not coming. It is what's from within Michael. A gift given you from above. A gift that you share so much with others. Laughter, tears, joy and pain. Thank God for the talent, and the "magic" within! |
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Michael
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Just wish to thank you all - you have made this a magical place for me. The wealth of friendship I see here is amazing. May God bless each and every one of you. Michael [This message has been edited by Michael (edited 02-26-2000).] |
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christies heart Member
since 1999-08-10
Posts 189NJ, USA |
Every work I read of yours is more wonderful! You are so talanted and this work speaks to that fact and to the struggle in the frustration about all those things that we can not change! |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
IF! IF! You have the most magical pen I've eve seen....you know, if it is magical, could I borrow it? I'd like to write like Mike!  |
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U K Hero Member
since 1999-08-08
Posts 266England |
Much enjoyed |
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Michael
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
LOL...PdV The last time I loaned my pen out it took 6 months to get it back - then it came back broken! Or was that my heart? you know I have a hard time separating the two.... Thanx U K and christies heart. Michael |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
AMEN!!! This is beautiful, Michael and has such an uplifting message!! Denise |
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