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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Feelings Sorry I'm going to have to cancel our little rendezvous today. I know I was supposed to call you at eleven and now its 12:20 so I'm not so surprised you just called me up and said "Whats going on honey?" I am so sorry sweetheart. I screwed up. Now I missed our luncheon date. You ate without me. That's right...why wait. Of course I can understand why you are hurt and mad and now you want me to make it up to you somehow. I will, I promise, but not today cause all these feelings I'm feeling just won't go away. One more time I admitted to you I really like you and thats not hard for me to say and not just a little, in a very big way. So why did I hold back today? Instead staying here searching my feelings and exploring my heart and pondering these feelings I now choose to feel, wondering what part of us is a fantasy and which part is real. Sweetheart, you just told me we are living in a reality. So, maybe tomorrow I'll be more ready to step into this reality and share some more of these feelings between you and me. We'll see, we shall surely see. Jameslee@February25,2000 forKCmySweetheart? |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
James~ Jump in already! I hope you tell her, you really need to. (just my thoughts) Great poem.  -SEA |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
sweet baby james... give her this poem...how can she resist...if she makes ya feel this way, your half way there  RIGHT? (smile)take care,janet marie ...there are places inside all our souls... that have never been touched... there are places inside our hearts... that need to be loved this much... Janet Marie *I miss you baby... I love you, always.* |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
To quote a phrase from Nike: 'Just do it'! Nice poem. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Sea, Janet Marie, and Poet de Vine for reading my poem and for your wonderful comments. Yes I have told her a couple times that I really like her and now it is her I am wondering about, does she really like me. Takes two to tango. James |
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