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JamesMichael
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0 posted 02-25-2000 06:11 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for JamesMichael

Feelings

Sorry I'm going to have to cancel
our little rendezvous today.
I know I was supposed to call you at eleven
and now its 12:20
so I'm not so surprised you just called me up
and said "Whats going on honey?"
I am so sorry sweetheart.
I screwed up.
Now I missed our luncheon date.
You ate without me.
That's right...why wait.

Of course I can understand why you are hurt and mad
and now you want me to make it up to you somehow.
I will, I promise, but not today
cause all these feelings I'm feeling just won't go away.
One more time I admitted to you I really like you and thats not hard for me to say
and not just a little, in a very big way.
So why did I hold back today?
Instead staying here searching my feelings and exploring my heart
and pondering these feelings I now choose to feel,
wondering what part of us is a fantasy and which part is real.

Sweetheart, you just told me we are living in a reality.
So, maybe tomorrow I'll be more ready
to step into this reality
and share some more of these feelings
between you and me.
We'll see, we shall surely see.

Jameslee@February25,2000
forKCmySweetheart?


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1 posted 02-25-2000 06:29 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

James~ Jump in already! I hope you tell her, you really need to. (just my thoughts) Great poem. -SEA
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2 posted 02-25-2000 09:56 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

sweet baby james...
give her this poem...how can she resist...if she makes ya feel this way, your half way there RIGHT? (smile)
take care,janet marie

 ...there are places inside all our souls...
that have never been touched...
there are places inside our hearts...
that need to be loved this much...
Janet Marie

*I miss you baby...
I love you, always.*

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3 posted 02-26-2000 06:44 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

To quote a phrase from Nike: 'Just do it'! Nice poem.
JamesMichael
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4 posted 02-26-2000 07:49 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Thank you Sea, Janet Marie, and Poet de Vine for reading my poem and for your wonderful comments.  Yes I have told her a couple times that I really like her and now it is her I am wondering about, does she really like me.  Takes two to tango.   James
 
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