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Visiting Plant Life
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Visiting Plant Life |
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christies heart Member
since 1999-08-10
Posts 189NJ, USA |
In the waking hours of a new spring, a Geranium petal lands on a pelargonium leaf. A visiting plant-life that has wandered through vast waters, finding our gardan, after floating tenderly from the canary islands, where the earth is warm; where Spring is never new. [This message has been edited by christies heart (edited 02-25-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
beautiful imagery here chris, just the perfect poem to chase away my winter blues very nice,take care, janet marie ...there are places inside all our souls... that have never been touched... there are places inside our hearts... that need to be loved this much... Janet Marie *I miss you baby... I love you, always.* |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
 Christie Beautiful imagery captured in this poem..the very essence of spring was brought out with this piece! Keep writing, I look forward to reading more of your work! AMY ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Oh, this is wonderful! |
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January Flowers Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 209South Carolina |
"Where spring is never new" I sure like the sounds of that! "Quaint" poem, and very fitting of all the anxious spring-filled posts in here as of late! |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Very nice... I enjoyed the poem. |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
This is excellent! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Loved it! And I can't help but smile that naughty evil grin...I can relate too well with this...and I am now wondering if Dr. Freud is covered by my HMO... |
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christies heart Member
since 1999-08-10
Posts 189NJ, USA |
Janet Marie...thank you. I am trying to get rid of those winter blues too! It helps to imagine the warmth.  Amy, Thanks for your kind feedback. I always enjoy reading your work as well.  January Flowers...I needed to do some quaint stuff after my dark mood as of late. It's time to look for the spring ahead. Thanks for the comment. Balladeer..Than means a lot to me, thank you so much. Serenity...HA!!! I never thought of it that way, but I am sure freud was lurking around in my brain when I wrote it. Looking back, you are quite right. I better make an appointment for the couch next to you! Grant that I may not judge my niegbor until I have walked a mile in his moccasians Native American prayer |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
"where Spring is never new".....excellent line...I like your whole poem too. |
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