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christies heart
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0 posted 02-25-2000 05:34 PM       View Profile for christies heart   Email christies heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for christies heart

In the waking hours of a new spring,
a Geranium petal lands
on a pelargonium leaf.
A visiting plant-life
that has wandered through
vast waters,
finding our gardan, after floating
tenderly from the canary islands,
where the earth is warm;
where Spring is never new.  


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Janet Marie
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1 posted 02-25-2000 05:47 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

beautiful imagery here chris, just the perfect poem to chase away my winter blues
very nice,take care, janet marie

 ...there are places inside all our souls...
that have never been touched...
there are places inside our hearts...
that need to be loved this much...
Janet Marie

*I miss you baby...
I love you, always.*

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2 posted 02-25-2000 05:52 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster


Christie

Beautiful imagery captured in this poem..the very essence of spring was brought out with this piece! Keep writing, I look forward to reading more of your work!

AMY



 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
Martie
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3 posted 02-25-2000 05:53 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Oh, this is wonderful!
January Flowers
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4 posted 02-25-2000 08:28 PM       View Profile for January Flowers   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for January Flowers

"Where spring is never new"

I sure like the sounds of that!  "Quaint" poem, and very fitting of all the anxious spring-filled posts in here as of late!
Mike
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5 posted 02-25-2000 08:31 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

Very nice...  I enjoyed the poem.
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6 posted 02-25-2000 09:39 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

This is excellent!
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7 posted 02-25-2000 10:15 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Loved it!  And I can't help but smile that
naughty evil grin...I can relate too well
with this...and I am now wondering if Dr. Freud is covered by my HMO...
christies heart
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8 posted 02-26-2000 06:02 AM       View Profile for christies heart   Email christies heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for christies heart

Janet Marie...thank you. I am trying to get rid of those winter blues too! It helps to imagine the warmth.  

Amy, Thanks for your kind feedback. I always enjoy reading your work as well.  

January Flowers...I needed to do some quaint stuff after my dark mood as of late. It's time to look for the spring ahead. Thanks for the comment.

Balladeer..Than means a lot to me, thank you so much.

Serenity...HA!!! I never thought of it that way, but I am sure freud was lurking around in my brain when I wrote it. Looking back, you are quite right. I better make an appointment for the couch next to you!



 Grant that I may not judge my niegbor until I have walked a mile in his moccasians

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"where Spring is never new".....excellent line...I like your whole poem too.
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