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Marina
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0 posted 2000-02-25 04:24 PM



And Don’t Forget To Sign….


I have one regret
More love to give
Yours I’ll never forget
It continues to live

Leaving wasn’t your choice
Gone from earth
I hear your voice
Singing in rebirth

Your with Him now,  I know
Mourning took long
I see you in  soft glow
Playing an angel’s song

We may live on different shores
But drop me a line
You need to write  me more
And don’t forget to sign….


Love Dad


Marina Feb 25/2000




[This message has been edited by Marina (edited 02-25-2000).]

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Janet Marie
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1 posted 2000-02-25 05:39 PM


this is a BEAUTIFUL tribute...i was touched by this...take care, janet marie

 ...there are places inside all our souls...
that have never been touched...
there are places inside our hearts...
that need to be loved this much...
Janet Marie

*I miss you baby...
I love you, always.*


Aimster
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2 posted 2000-02-25 05:42 PM


~Marina~

This is simply beautiful! Loved the style and the message..in a word...awesome! Keep up the great poetry writing!

Amy


 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~

RufffRyder
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3 posted 2000-02-25 05:47 PM


BEAUTIFUL!!!!!
Ditto Janet,This is a very touching tribute.
Nice read Marina.

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2000-02-25 05:48 PM


You have such a soft and beautiful heart.  James
Parker
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5 posted 2000-02-25 06:50 PM


Marina, Everytime I read it, it brings a longing for my dad too. This is one of my Favorites of yours.

James

Danny Holloway
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6 posted 2000-02-25 06:56 PM


Very nice poem!  
Hope your staying warm on those cold Canada nights.

Denise
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7 posted 2000-02-25 07:36 PM


This is a wonderful, beautiful tribute, Marina! It touched my heart!

Denise

Marge Tindal
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8 posted 2000-02-25 07:41 PM


Marina~
This is very lovely.
Bless you.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Marina
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9 posted 2000-02-25 09:32 PM


Thank-you Everyone!!  I have learned that you should always tell someone how you feel because tomarrow may never come....
I just hope that my Dad can see this so as too remind him how much he is missed.

Marina

devina
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10 posted 2000-02-25 09:39 PM


This is a lovely tribute to your dad...makes me remember my dad that I lost years ago...

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

January Flowers
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11 posted 2000-02-25 10:37 PM


Soooooo true!
This is a lovely writing!

Marina
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12 posted 2000-02-26 09:20 AM


devina and January Flowers: Thanks to both of you!  

Marina


[This message has been edited by Marina (edited 02-26-2000).]

Marina
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13 posted 2000-02-26 06:39 PM


Danny: I could never be warm enough.

[This message has been edited by Marina (edited 02-26-2000).]

Sven
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14 posted 2000-02-27 06:53 PM


Marina. . . this is wonderful. . .

I lost my father when I was 10. . .and I have always told those who have complained about their fathers or mothers that at least they have a parent to complain about. . .

Thank you. . .

---------------------------------------------

 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Grandma Jo
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15 posted 2000-02-27 07:00 PM


I am sure your Dad can see this. And he will love what he sees. Lovely tribute!
Marina
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16 posted 2000-02-27 09:48 PM


Sven: Thank you very much and you are exactly right!

Grandama Jo: Thank you. I am a firm believer that our souls continue too exsist beyond our physical bodies.

Marina

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