A Slow Goodbye (thanx james)

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A Slow Goodbye (thanx james)

just_another_fe
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since 2000-02-05

Posts 483
MICHIGAN

0 posted 2000-02-25 03:40 PM

I'm moving on
so let me be.
It's gonna take time
but i'm getting over you.....slowly.
This is your loss
can't you see?
This is what's best
for not you but me.
You'll be sorry
missing me
but i'll be happy
with somebody.
Your not feeling it yet
but one day you'll see
your BIGGEST mistake
was leaving me.

[This message has been edited by just_another_fe (edited 02-25-2000).]

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2000-02-25 03:44 PM

I Love this so much. How about "A slow goodbye" James

just_another_fe
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2 posted 2000-02-25 03:52 PM

LUV IT THANX

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2000-02-26 07:45 AM

This is the first time anyone has listened to my idea about naming a poem. I think I love you just another fe. James

just_another_fe
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since 2000-02-05

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4 posted 2000-02-26 11:29 AM

lol thanx james. at least someone loves me

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19

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Charlotte, NC

5 posted 2000-02-26 12:07 PM

~JAF~

I LOVED this poem! A slow goodbye...I love the title, the words, the message, and the depth of emotion. Kudos!!

Amy

~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~

RufffRyder
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since 2000-02-25

Posts 143
<------Over There------>

6 posted 2000-02-27 01:03 PM

RIGHT ON!!!!
You tell him

He might not be hurting now but when he opens his eyes and see what he`s lost,then he`ll be hurting.
His Loss is right.
Thank you for the Powerful read

HelmutB
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since 2000-01-06

Posts 964
Canada

7 posted 2000-02-27 01:22 PM

Sadly but true
We sometimes only get to know what we had when we lost it.
Ovbiously he lost out here
Very well done

The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

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