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A Slow Goodbye (thanx james)

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just_another_fe
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0 posted 02-25-2000 03:40 PM       View Profile for just_another_fe   Email just_another_fe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit just_another_fe's Home Page   View IP for just_another_fe

I'm moving on
so let me be.
It's gonna take time
but i'm getting over you.....slowly.
This is your loss
can't you see?
This is what's best
for not you but me.
You'll be sorry
missing me
but i'll be happy
with somebody.
Your not feeling it yet
but one day you'll see
your BIGGEST mistake
was leaving me.

[This message has been edited by just_another_fe (edited 02-25-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 Angie - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 02-25-2000 03:44 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

I Love this so much.   How about "A slow goodbye"   James
just_another_fe
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2 posted 02-25-2000 03:52 PM       View Profile for just_another_fe   Email just_another_fe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit just_another_fe's Home Page   View IP for just_another_fe

LUV IT THANX  
JamesMichael
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This is the first time anyone has listened to my idea about naming a poem.   I think I love you just another fe.  James
just_another_fe
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lol thanx james. at least someone loves me  
Aimster
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5 posted 02-26-2000 12:07 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

~JAF~

I LOVED this poem! A slow goodbye...I love the title, the words, the message, and the depth of emotion. Kudos!!

Amy  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
RufffRyder
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RIGHT ON!!!!
You tell him
He might not be hurting now but when he opens his eyes and see what he`s lost,then he`ll be hurting.
His Loss is right.
Thank you for the Powerful read
HelmutB
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7 posted 02-27-2000 01:22 PM       View Profile for HelmutB   Email HelmutB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HelmutB's Home Page   View IP for HelmutB

Sadly but true
We sometimes only get to know what we had when we lost it.
Ovbiously he lost out here
Very well done

 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

 
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