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Words of call

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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 02-25-2000 03:15 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Seymour Tabin

           Words of call

Enraptured pen of verse and rhyme,
Has captured me in timeless time.
Feeding into my wishing well,
Those whispers of a lovers spell.

Striking the umbilical cord.
Commanding heavens harps applaud.
The essence overwhelms my dreams.
Entering into every theme.

Her echoes knock on every door.
And pays no heed to any law.
She butterflies within my head
And seeds it like a flower bed.

Shawls me with her feathered quill,
Words that bring my pulse to still.
Dares the Gods that made our fate.
Slow the hour glass to late.

How can I answer such a call?
Except to offer up, my all.

© Copyright 2000 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
poetFemmeFatale
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1 posted 02-25-2000 03:28 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Oh to feel helplessly smitten by words of fine silk...spun so delicately, and displayed to lure all who look...aaahhh.  I know that feeling all too well. Keep your head on straight, and your heart at a distance!  LOL  Just funning with you sir!     I love reading your works, because there's always some deep emotional "stir" in there somewhere...Beautiful poem here.
Elizabeth Santos
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2 posted 02-25-2000 03:31 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Sy,
Did you ever think her call might be
An answer to a call from thee
Her pen is in reciprocate
To verses of her heart's elate
And she perhaps would never write
If not inspired by his light
So back and forth the poetry goes
In candelabra's subtle glows
Love ya
Liz

Martie
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3 posted 02-25-2000 04:14 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Your words have me smitten
for what you have written
I remember from a time
I wrote such tender rhyme

But truth has pressed delete
and a heart's now incomplete
and all those wonderous words
are forever by time blurred
**
Lovely poem Sy.
Janet Marie
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4 posted 02-25-2000 05:36 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

"Enraptured pen of verse and rhyme,
Has captured me in timeless time.
Feeding into my wishing well,
Those whispers of a lovers spell."

poetic perfection...I love this one..
excellent work!! take care, janet marie



 ...there are places inside all our souls...
that have never been touched...
there are places inside our hearts...
that need to be loved this much...
Janet Marie

*I miss you baby...
I love you, always.*

Denise
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5 posted 02-25-2000 07:13 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

So beautiful!! *sigh*

Denise
Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 02-25-2000 09:49 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

PFF, Your comments have the thread of silk,
All kindness and no ilk. *L*

Elizabeth, Your answers always fills me with revelry. LOve Sy

Martie, What came before will come once more.
*L*

Janet, Quoting from my verse is the highest type of flatery, thank you.

Denise, Thank you sweet lady. *L*
Marge Tindal
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7 posted 02-25-2000 09:50 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Seymour~
This is probably one of the tenderest
pieces I've seen you do.

'She butterflies within my head
And seeds it like a flower bed.'


You have 'offered up my all' with this beautiful rendering.
~*Marge*~




 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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8 posted 02-25-2000 10:16 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Our all is all we can give, Sy. This is excellent writing.
Lost Dreamer
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9 posted 02-25-2000 10:21 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

This is fabulous, I love it.
Corinne
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10 posted 02-25-2000 10:42 PM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

Another beautiful piece, all of your work is so, Seymour!


Corinne
Michael
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11 posted 02-26-2000 04:51 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Deep and beautiful words, Sy.  Indeed, only by offering up all.


michael
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12 posted 02-26-2000 06:57 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Wonderful poem..but then I've not read one of yours I didn't like.  
U K Hero
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13 posted 02-26-2000 07:44 AM       View Profile for U K Hero   Email U K Hero   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for U K Hero

Another fine piece Seymour.
 
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