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Words of call
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Words of call |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Words of call Enraptured pen of verse and rhyme, Has captured me in timeless time. Feeding into my wishing well, Those whispers of a lovers spell. Striking the umbilical cord. Commanding heavens harps applaud. The essence overwhelms my dreams. Entering into every theme. Her echoes knock on every door. And pays no heed to any law. She butterflies within my head And seeds it like a flower bed. Shawls me with her feathered quill, Words that bring my pulse to still. Dares the Gods that made our fate. Slow the hour glass to late. How can I answer such a call? Except to offer up, my all. |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Oh to feel helplessly smitten by words of fine silk...spun so delicately, and displayed to lure all who look...aaahhh. I know that feeling all too well. Keep your head on straight, and your heart at a distance! LOL Just funning with you sir!  I love reading your works, because there's always some deep emotional "stir" in there somewhere...Beautiful poem here. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sy, Did you ever think her call might be An answer to a call from thee Her pen is in reciprocate To verses of her heart's elate And she perhaps would never write If not inspired by his light So back and forth the poetry goes In candelabra's subtle glows Love ya Liz |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Your words have me smitten for what you have written I remember from a time I wrote such tender rhyme But truth has pressed delete and a heart's now incomplete and all those wonderous words are forever by time blurred ** Lovely poem Sy. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
"Enraptured pen of verse and rhyme, Has captured me in timeless time. Feeding into my wishing well, Those whispers of a lovers spell." poetic perfection...I love this one.. excellent work!! take care, janet marie ...there are places inside all our souls... that have never been touched... there are places inside our hearts... that need to be loved this much... Janet Marie *I miss you baby... I love you, always.* |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
So beautiful!! *sigh* Denise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
PFF, Your comments have the thread of silk, All kindness and no ilk. *L* Elizabeth, Your answers always fills me with revelry. LOve Sy Martie, What came before will come once more. *L* Janet, Quoting from my verse is the highest type of flatery, thank you. Denise, Thank you sweet lady. *L* |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ This is probably one of the tenderest pieces I've seen you do. 'She butterflies within my head And seeds it like a flower bed.' You have 'offered up my all' with this beautiful rendering. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Our all is all we can give, Sy. This is excellent writing. |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
This is fabulous, I love it. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Another beautiful piece, all of your work is so, Seymour! Corinne |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Deep and beautiful words, Sy. Indeed, only by offering up all. michael |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Wonderful poem..but then I've not read one of yours I didn't like.  |
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U K Hero Member
since 1999-08-08
Posts 266England |
Another fine piece Seymour. |
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