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Upon My Dreams

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Mike
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0 posted 02-25-2000 02:06 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Mike


I seek in my tomorrows,
...memories of today,
To lose my pain and sorrow,
...and smell life's sweet bouquet.

I'll once again feel summer rain,
...fall from the skies above,
Hold you gently in my arms,
...and whisper words of love.

On the winds, a madrigal,
...brings forth the songs of spring,
In pathless woods, mine pleasure seek,
...the joys to me you bring.

I journey through the wall of tears,
...sunlit days of soothing clime,
I seek mirage of love gone by,
...I drift on river time.

Above high peaks of pristine glory,
...altars to the sky,
Down below the peaceful valley,
...nevermore to cry.

I walk amid high mountain's meadow,
...I hear your siren's call,
Breathe in the scent of fragrant pine,
...my heart you do enthrall.

Once upon a summer's eve,
...in moon's translucent beams,
Within the arms of welkin's night,
...I dance upon my dreams.
© Copyright 2000 Mike - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 02-25-2000 02:09 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

So lovely is this boquet of life you pick and place so perfectly into words.  Super poem!
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2 posted 02-25-2000 03:47 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

Mike, such a delicate framework you've given this piece...the subtle  power within the elemental references is inspiring, to say the very least. Each line reads as if written from within a fragrant mountain meadow, alive with the restful rhythm of the earth's dreaming breath. I could read this a million times over and love it all the more...I think it's the serenity of the dream, overshadowing the sorrow, that makes it so expressive, for me, at least. I don't mean to carry on so, but this seems to be just what I needed to read today. Thank you!
Claire
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3 posted 02-25-2000 06:02 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Mike, this expression is exquisite!!!
lovely imagery and tender emotions...I love this one. very nice.
take care, janet marie

 ...there are places inside all our souls...
that have never been touched...
there are places inside our hearts...
that need to be loved this much...
Janet Marie

*I miss you baby...
I love you, always.*

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4 posted 02-25-2000 06:42 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Oh, Mike, this is amazing! So very beautiful!

Denise
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Really appreciate the replies.  I am glad you enjoyed the poem.  Danke....
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Lyrical and entrancing...enjoying this very
much!
Alwye
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7 posted 02-26-2000 01:19 AM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Beautiful, sweet, delicate, exquisite...I truly loved this.  Exellent work!  

 *Krista Knutson*

"Every moment marked with apparitions of your soul...." ~*Sarah McLachlan- Do What You Have To Do*~

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Lovely  
Michael
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9 posted 02-26-2000 03:36 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Exceptionally graceful, delicate poem.  Beauty flows all throughout this piece, Mike.
A definate two thumbs up!


Michael
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I liked the way you put this together Mike, It touched me.
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Ah. You never fail to bring a smile to my face with your beautiful poetry.  
Elizabeth Santos
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12 posted 02-26-2000 10:21 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Exquisite ppem!
Very melodic and delicate
Liz
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WoW!!!!!!!What a lovely poem!!!!!!!!
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14 posted 02-26-2000 10:40 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Mike~
You have such a lovely way with thoughts.
This one is certainly no exception.
I like the gentleness of it.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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