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Corazon
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0 posted 2000-02-25 12:11 PM


I am blessed

Sitting on the kitchen floor
one spoon, 2 mouths
one cup of chocolate pudding
Like a little bird
he opens his mouth
for his turn.
The pureness of his soul
radiates as he smiles,
looks into my eyes and
with a chocolate rimmed mouth
says " mmmmm "
when its my turn
too



[This message has been edited by Corazon (edited 02-25-2000).]

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suthern
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1 posted 2000-02-25 12:31 PM


Awwww... this one makes me want to hug your little one (and get in line for my share of that pudding! LOL)
January Flowers
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2 posted 2000-02-25 12:35 PM


Exerpt of a wondeful moment shared!
Thanks for the smiles!

Corazon
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3 posted 2000-02-25 02:27 PM


well suthern just open your mouth wide...*aims her spoon at the monitor* lolol he's pretty special...I am blessed

thanks JF...

Martie
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4 posted 2000-02-25 02:33 PM


This is so precious--takes a picture to keep and to think of many years from now--that's what this poem does.
hoot_owl_rn
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5 posted 2000-02-25 02:34 PM


Awww...I love this one. Reminds me of when my kids were younger, brought back some nice memories for a change  
WhtDove
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6 posted 2000-02-25 03:43 PM


Thank you! That did bring smiles. Warmed the hearts of many! Just picturing that chocolate pudding smile! Yum!  You have to take a picture of that and save it for when he grows older. Everyone get a good laugh out of it!    Thank you, that's precious!
Munda
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7 posted 2000-02-25 05:46 PM


Love this Corazon !   Brought back some "spagetti" memories  
Corazon
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8 posted 2000-02-25 06:42 PM


thanks all, I have one called Oreos...his first time with oreos and milk...yep, pretty precious...glad to make you all smile  
Denise
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9 posted 2000-02-25 07:02 PM


Thanks for the smiles, Corazon!  

Denise

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10 posted 2000-02-25 09:14 PM


Aw, you really tugged with this one...such a precious action. There are so many if our eyes are open to take them in. Beautiful, Corazony one.  
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11 posted 2000-02-25 10:13 PM


Corazon~
Just too precious.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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JTF
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12 posted 2000-02-29 04:09 AM


So cute !! ...   ... I love that picture but I've just realised that Oreos is not his name ... ROFL ... Dumb Frog hitting his head !!
Corazon
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13 posted 2000-03-01 09:37 AM


ROFG@Oreos....lolol thanks for the smile, I sure needed it  
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