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Denise
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0 posted 2000-02-25 12:07 PM


A magic world of star-dust dreams
Of candy rainbows, bright moon beams

Majestic castles made of sand
All turning out just like you planned

Red shiny trucks and tiny cars
A galaxy of wishing-stars

Lots of laughter and tons of fun
From ev'ry dawn to setting sun

And ev'ry blessing from above
Straight from His gentle heart of love

All wished for you - that little guy
We'll love forever - our 'Ty-Ty'!


(for my nephew Tyler's 4th birthday, last May)

Denise


© Copyright 2000 Denise - All Rights Reserved
WhtDove
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1 posted 2000-02-25 12:10 PM


Denise you've filled my day with candy rainbows! This was fantastic!  
January Flowers
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2 posted 2000-02-25 12:13 PM


Just "smiling" at this one!
This Oooozes such pride and love.
And the title has me craving Skittles!

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3 posted 2000-02-25 12:16 PM


Candy rainbows! sounds beautiful AND yummy. I have a sweet tooth today. All joking aside, what a lovely poem. The love you feel for your nephew has been displayed with poetic justice here. Nice work!

Amy

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~

RainbowGirl
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4 posted 2000-02-25 12:55 PM


Denise: Bless you, I bet he's a right little character and spoilt ...*g*

HUSG

ps: I'll get round to answering mail shortly..

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Rex Allen McCoy
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5 posted 2000-02-25 01:33 PM


Kids are just the brightest stars that light our skies ... too bad they grow

Rex}<{{{{o>

Martie
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6 posted 2000-02-25 02:06 PM


This is so sweet Denise, as are you.
hoot_owl_rn
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7 posted 2000-02-25 02:30 PM


How sweet for you to do this for him  
Denise
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8 posted 2000-02-25 06:34 PM


Thank you, Rebecca, January, Amy, Cindy, Rex, Martie and Ruth! I'm glad you all liked it! This was one that I wasn't going to post because I thought it was too personal for anyone else to appreciate but I wanted to post something else happy for HAPPY Poetry Day...hehehehe  


Denise

Cindy: no rush! Things are running back to normal....they modemed in last night and did a restore utilities and a reinitialization of my system.....I still don't have Com2 in my Device Manager though and my modum baud rate is still 9600 under Modem Diagnostics...
I appreciate all the help you have given me, Cindy! Thanks so much! HUGS

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9 posted 2000-02-25 06:38 PM


A smile from the inside out. that is all i can say.
RainbowGirl
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10 posted 2000-02-25 06:44 PM


Denise, I believe what has happened is that win98 kicked in with a generic modem for win-modems...I also have the same modem as you but the UK version and mine doesn't show in device either but that's because they feel that all users are idiots and try to keep their settings safe so take them out of harms way....you can restore it, albeit temporarily by deleted the device from Device manager, rebooting and changing the Com port to 2, (mine was originally set to 5 as I had had another modem installed and win98 still saw it as functioning when I'd taken it out and replaced it) but deleting it enabled me to correct the baud rate to the correct one....one day, we shall all return to being intelligent human beings...LOL in the meantime, make use of me..*g*

HUSG

Denise
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11 posted 2000-02-27 09:21 PM


Thanks, Cindy! I do appreciate all your help! This problem even stumped the techs! I'm glad I have you to walk me through this!

HUGS
Denise

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12 posted 2000-02-28 10:53 PM


I particularly liked this because it was personal.
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13 posted 2000-02-28 10:55 PM


All smiles here Denise.  Like a Christmas morning....Not a cloud in sight

 There are two kinds of pedestrians...the quick and the dead. Drive it like you stole it.


Denise
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14 posted 2000-02-28 11:45 PM


Thank you, Gurion, Soleil and David! I'm so glad you all liked this one!  

Denise

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15 posted 2000-02-29 12:57 PM


I can see that your a very proud aunty.
I wish we could keep that childhood imagination
At 4 yrs old,a stick is a sword,a box is a castle and a dog is the fire breathing dragon.lol
Im happy for you,happy that your wish came true.
Thank`s for such a warm happy read

Denise
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16 posted 2000-02-29 08:01 PM


Thank you RufffRyder! I'm glad you enjoyed it and I'm glad that it was the inspiration for your beautiful, delightful poem!  

Denise

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17 posted 2000-02-29 08:11 PM


Denise~
Your heart is smiling here.
~*Marge*~


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Seymour Tabin
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18 posted 2000-02-29 08:27 PM


Denise,
Just beautiful. *L*

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19 posted 2000-02-29 10:35 PM


Hi Denise,

I missed this wonderful poem about your grandson, it made me think back to when my son A.J. was a little boy, WOW time has gone by so fast, now he's a eighteen year old and out of the house already. It was so easy when they played with little red trucks.

Cerenity

Denise
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20 posted 2000-02-29 11:04 PM


Yes it is Marge! It is literally beaming! Thanks so much for reading and commenting!
Thank you, too, Seymour and Cerenity! I didn't see you there! I guess my browser is screwing up again! Thanks for your wonderful comments!
  

Denise

[This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 02-29-2000).]

Michael
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21 posted 2000-02-29 11:09 PM


This is lovely, Denise.  What beautiful moments can be found in children.  Excuse me while I run and call Mikey.


Michael

Denise
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22 posted 2000-02-29 11:16 PM


Thank you, Michael! I'm glad you liked it! Tell Mikey I said hello!

Denise

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