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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209
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every time our eyes meet mine look down and away I have tried to show you with the existence of separate beds I have showed you even more so with my refusal to go to yours, but to say the words and rip the hope I see in your eyes for a love confused but not yet dead is beyond me so I look down and away [This message has been edited by Corazon (edited 02-25-2000).] |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
~Corazon~ This poem has much feeling and depth into it. Its very hard to say how we feel to someone, when they have that "look" of hope in their eyes. I hope things work out for the best for you! Amy  ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
A friend of ours wrote a poem for you long ago about looking up... I hope the day comes soon when your gaze isn't fixed on the floor... even if your new horizons are out the door. |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
hey, can I ditto a comment on my own poem???...sigh...I know my friend...but from the other day, its gotta go up...don't think I will stand to see it go any lower....thanks though...for being there for me *big hugs* |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Hmmm, it's Friday, isn't it?... You know what they say sweetheart, when life gets that bad, it can only go UP and up it will go...Now how about a good old cup of tea? Some good old fashioned hugs as well and I'm sure Suthern can bring some yummy cake.. Big HUSG Ouvrir mon coeur et âme |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Hang in there sweetie...like you said, things can only get better at this point- and I hope they do!!! HUGS!!!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
yep, friday and yep, some day...some day...the three of us will have tea and cake....whew....won't that be the day to remember?thanks for the hugs thanks devina...I am trying...gotta get this stuff out before I get better....but I WILL GET BETTER!.... [This message has been edited by Corazon (edited 02-25-2000).] |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I've certainly been there...you've expressed these feelings so well...wonderful piece |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Corazon, very meaningful poem. I hope you find the answer and strength for. Parker |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Really nice poem Corazon, I wish you the best. James |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Corazon, this is moving...touching emotions... I understand its feelings...a friend of mine was going thru a painful divorce...this was a favorite verse of hers...she said it gave her strength..your poem here, reminded me of it... "its so nice to wake up...all alone... and not have to tell someone you love them...when you dont love them anymore"...Richard Brautigan ...there are places inside all our souls... that have never been touched... there are places inside our hearts... that need to be loved this much... Janet Marie *I miss you baby... I love you, always.* |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Corazon~ This is so very sad. I'm so sorry for you. It must be confusing. I hope it works out. -SEA |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
thanks so much all...I am working through some feelings that will affect my life greatly...and posting them here helps me a lot...thanks for being my sounding board |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Keep on writing--life is hard sometimes, just remember good times will come again. They always do. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Corazon~ Hon, when you're stuck in neutral ... it's time to shift gears. Look ahead where you're going, not backward to where you've been. Just don't glance away. A *hug* is yours. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Corazon, this is a bittersweet piece to read, but, still worthy of great praise, it is such a painfully beautiful poem. You express your emotions so well and with a sympathy. I wish you all the best, and know that you have friends here to help you when you are down. Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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JTF Member
since 1999-08-09
Posts 319France |
I'm always trying to look up !! ... especially when there's a woman climbing stairs in front of me ... oooops, wrong board, sorry Corazon ...  |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Like the old song says, "I been down so long it looks like up to me". Hang in there, girl. (at least, it's a good way to find dropped nickels ) |
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