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Love Those HOTWHEELS! (fellow parents are sure to relate)

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January Flowers
since 02-01-2000
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0 posted 02-25-2000 11:31 AM       View Profile for January Flowers   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for January Flowers

GO, Mark Martin!

To watch my sons in action
  is surely to amaze
Your heart with all the passion
they put into daily play.

A happier child cannot be found
than these two with their toy cars.
And imagination has no bounds
when racing around in the backyard.

The sound effects are just the beginning
  of their storyline~
When they tire of pretending,
they put their cars in a line

and admire the vast collection
(a hundred seventy-four at last count!).
These boys show much affection
  for the cars that Hotwheels puts out.

These tiny cars are in the chairs,
  the beds and the tank for fish.
I find them underneath the stairs
and even in our dog’s dish.

They’re everywhere they shouldn’t be
and in our home run loose...
I’d swear if it didn’t sound crazy,
these hotwheels reproduce!

Many parents, though, can relate,
  even some with small daughters.
These race car toys create
  amusement that last for hours.

Overall, I must say
  (although sometimes I wonder!),
Hotwheels cars are here to stay,
  ‘cause they’re what my kids do want for.

I only wish I had the chance
to turn back the hands on the clock
and take advantage of circumstance
and buy up all the Hotwheels stock!

[This message has been edited by January Flowers (edited 02-25-2000).]
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Member Rara Avis
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1 posted 02-25-2000 11:55 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

LOL we sure needed this one around here! I can relate but not so much to hot wheels. My son didn't take an intrest in those, but my 2 daughters and the barbies and accessories.  hahaha....and now the pokemon stuff, cards, cards are everywhere!  Thanks for such an uplifting piece!
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2 posted 02-25-2000 11:58 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

ahahahahaha......this is great!!! Love it!!

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since 02-19-2000
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3 posted 02-25-2000 12:11 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster


This was just the cutest poem! I don't have children yet of my own..but I have two sister and lots of boy cousins. So I know all too well what you mean in this poem, about them being everywhere. I was a bit of a tomboy myself growing up and i loved "boy" toys   Great job!


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4 posted 02-25-2000 01:14 PM       View Profile for PhaerieChild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PhaerieChild

I can really relate to this!!! Now that they are grown and have real cars, they still call 'em Hotwheels. Sometimes I really long for the days when they could park their cars in the backyard LOL. Very cute poem and thanks for the memories.

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Shawna R. Holder
Boise, Idaho

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5 posted 02-25-2000 02:43 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

They do reproduce.  Your boys have the hot wheel grandchildren of the ones my boys had many years ago.  They haven't changed a bit.  Thanks for the memory.
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6 posted 02-25-2000 02:54 PM       View Profile for bobbycat   Email bobbycat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bobbycat son is only 21 months old, and is already in love with Hot Wheels!!!  He owns about 15 of them, and we can't ever leave the house without one clutched tightly in his hand!  Thanks for the I know what I have to look forward to!    

Bobbycat =^..^=

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7 posted 02-25-2000 03:01 PM       View Profile for Corazon   Email Corazon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corazon

loved this, loved the ending...
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8 posted 02-25-2000 06:13 PM       View Profile for RufffRyder   Email RufffRyder   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RufffRyder's Home Page   View IP for RufffRyder

Ok now,we all know that those hotwheels are really your`s
I still like playing with hotwheels.
Except the one`s I play with today (like all other big boy`s)cost more and won`t fit in the furniture
Nice read J.F.
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