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You Gazed Into My Eyes Tonight (Repost from # 5...something pretty for WhtDove)

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Denise
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You gazed into my eyes tonight
I spied a glimmer of delight

A smile filled with heaven's grace
So swiftly spread across your face

Alone we were, just you and me
Enraptured in sweet reverie

These times of ponder are the best
By far more special than the rest

I gazed into your eyes tonight
You filled my soul with sheer delight

You touched my hand and then my face
A moment safe from time's erase

Those eyes that will a future see
Long after I shall cease to be

Tonight have told me I am blessed
They'll not forsake me when I rest

They'll carry me long past this night
Remembering long gone delight

Recalling well this time and place
When we were touched by heaven's grace

And through your eyes I too will see
Those future days still yet to be

Long after I am laid to rest
They'll sing for me that we were blessed.


01/10/2000

(For my grandson, Christian Michael, that little sweetie!)

Denise


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1 posted 02-25-2000 11:41 AM       View Profile for January Flowers   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for January Flowers

Can tell this one is written with a gentle heart and talented soul...Beautiful, this is, Denise!
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Denise thank you sweetie! I still find this spectacular! Uplifting and what a blessing!
Those precious moments with little ones.
Thank you for reposting this Denise!

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One way you can save your riches,
And the other will save your soul.
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3 posted 02-25-2000 12:14 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

Denise~
This was such an amazing and uplifting poem. This is the first piece I've read of yours. I really liked it. Time sure flies by so fast...so its important to spend as much time as we can with little ones. Your talent is shining through!

Amy      

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4 posted 02-25-2000 12:28 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

I love this! *S*
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5 posted 02-25-2000 06:24 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Thank you, January, Rebecca, Amy and Suthern! I'm glad you all liked it!        

Denise        
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Yes, this is so sweet and precious and pretty.  Thanks for reposting.
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7 posted 02-27-2000 09:23 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Thank you Martie! I'm glad you liked it!

Denise
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You are right, this is very pretty...infact, beautiful is more the word I'd use  
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Thank you, Ruth! I'm glad you think so!

Denise
 
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