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Fetchet( my shot for Dovie)

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tori
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0 posted 02-25-2000 11:22 AM       View Profile for tori   Email tori   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit tori's Home Page   View IP for tori

Fetchet  was a cricket who rubbed his legs together
About the time the sun shined bright with the promise of good weather
Theo the muscles had a down word look all through the  cold of winter
Old Fetchet had to hobble out and rub them skinny legs together

Long  and hard he rubbed and rubbed with them skinny stings he called legs
Just an old  brown ugly bug put on this earth to sing

A rub, a rub , jitters here, a jitters here and there

He polished them there legs
from his toes up to his underwear
Now a song could be herd, through the crisp light spring moon air
With a sound so  full it made it feel like Fetchet was everywhere!!
Yeah Fetchet was a cricket, an old ugly bug was he
Yet his song that spring was a coming,
made his music a symphony!

tori



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I've not wasted one drop of ink
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1 posted 02-25-2000 11:30 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Thank you Tori! Very cute. Ever have something so ugly it's cute? Ol' Fetchet...he made one hell of a symphony!

Thanks girl!

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One way you can save your riches,
And the other will save your soul.
Rich Mullins


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2 posted 02-25-2000 11:33 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is soooooo cute, Tori!  

Denise
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Ahhh.... so HE's the one singing on my porch every night when I'm trying to get to sleep! LOL. (Ya think ole Fetchet could play his tune piannissimo? *G*) Enjoyed, tori!  
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Tori~
Laughing here.

Perhaps he could play SOLO .....
OH, NO, Marge ..... not that old one ....
yep ...
SO LO nobody could hear him !

Oh, God ... is Dove laughing yet?
~*MArge*~


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5 posted 02-25-2000 09:37 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

hehe. Nicely done, Tori! Even crickets are easy targets for a good poet's pen  
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6 posted 02-26-2000 01:06 PM       View Profile for tori   Email tori   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tori's Home Page   View IP for tori

Your welcome Dove~~
Thanks to all of you for the reply~
I was hoping to hear him sing last night it was 70 here yesterday... but I guess he know's more then weather men~~ it droped back down to 30 last night~~ sniff sniff....

 If with pen in hand I've made you think
I've not wasted one drop of ink
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