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Fetchet( my shot for Dovie)
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Fetchet( my shot for Dovie) |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
Fetchet was a cricket who rubbed his legs together About the time the sun shined bright with the promise of good weather Theo the muscles had a down word look all through the cold of winter Old Fetchet had to hobble out and rub them skinny legs together Long and hard he rubbed and rubbed with them skinny stings he called legs Just an old brown ugly bug put on this earth to sing A rub, a rub , jitters here, a jitters here and there He polished them there legs from his toes up to his underwear Now a song could be herd, through the crisp light spring moon air With a sound so full it made it feel like Fetchet was everywhere!! Yeah Fetchet was a cricket, an old ugly bug was he Yet his song that spring was a coming, made his music a symphony! tori If with pen in hand I've made you think I've not wasted one drop of ink Vlh. visit my site~ http://www.hsanet.net/user/dkm/hellomy.htm |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Thank you Tori! Very cute. Ever have something so ugly it's cute? Ol' Fetchet...he made one hell of a symphony! Thanks girl!< !signature--> <*\\\>< There's only two ways you can go... One way you can save your riches, And the other will save your soul. Rich Mullins [This message has been edited by WhtDove (edited 02-25-2000).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is soooooo cute, Tori!  Denise |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Ahhh.... so HE's the one singing on my porch every night when I'm trying to get to sleep! LOL. (Ya think ole Fetchet could play his tune piannissimo? *G*) Enjoyed, tori!  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tori~ Laughing here. Perhaps he could play SOLO ..... OH, NO, Marge ..... not that old one .... yep ... SO LO nobody could hear him ! Oh, God ... is Dove laughing yet? ~*MArge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
hehe. Nicely done, Tori! Even crickets are easy targets for a good poet's pen |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
Your welcome Dove~~ Thanks to all of you for the reply~ I was hoping to hear him sing last night it was 70 here yesterday... but I guess he know's more then weather men~~ it droped back down to 30 last night~~ sniff sniff.... If with pen in hand I've made you think I've not wasted one drop of ink Vlh. visit my site~ http://www.hsanet.net/user/dkm/hellomy.htm |
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