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Passing Moment

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Lost Dreamer
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0 posted 02-25-2000 11:03 AM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Passing Moment

I caught your mesmerizing melt one's soul
eyes of blue
a magnetically connected trance I was in
before I knew,
soaring swiftly into a brief passing
moment of desire.
My lost dreaming mind igniting my senses
on fire
this passing moment sent birdies
fluttering in delight
if I were candy M&M's I would have
melted in flight.

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ahhhhhh......this is so sweet!! hey, pass the M&M's would you......shhhhhh....don't tell anyone I'm on a diet....just pass me them M&M's PLEASE?  But seriously, Gloria, this is beautiful!!
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~Lost Dreamer~

This is a really sweet and inspiring poem. Oh the first feeling of love   Great poem!

Amy

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
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Hey can I have some of those M&M's too?  Yum!
Gloria this was uplifting and wonderful. Just we needed!  
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Denise: Thank You

Aimster: Thank You

WhtDove: Thank You

A little note here, this poem is about being mesmerized by a strangers eyes for just a passing moment. Sorry all the M&M's melted in my hand...LOL
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