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Passing Moment
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Passing Moment |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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Passing Moment I caught your mesmerizing melt one's soul eyes of blue a magnetically connected trance I was in before I knew, soaring swiftly into a brief passing moment of desire. My lost dreaming mind igniting my senses on fire this passing moment sent birdies fluttering in delight if I were candy M&M's I would have melted in flight. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
ahhhhhh......this is so sweet!! hey, pass the M&M's would you......shhhhhh....don't tell anyone I'm on a diet....just pass me them M&M's PLEASE? But seriously, Gloria, this is beautiful!! |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
~Lost Dreamer~ This is a really sweet and inspiring poem. Oh the first feeling of love  Great poem! Amy ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Hey can I have some of those M&M's too? Yum! Gloria this was uplifting and wonderful. Just we needed! |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Denise: Thank You Aimster: Thank You WhtDove: Thank You A little note here, this poem is about being mesmerized by a strangers eyes for just a passing moment. Sorry all the M&M's melted in my hand...LOL |
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